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    Sorry??

    What does the word even mean An apology that is supposed to be given when felt The word does not erase the feelings That absolute absurdity of it   As a child you were made to say your sorry Looking in that same child's eyes  There...

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    • I remember my grandma used to sit down and talk quietly with us when we did something we shouldn’t have. She’d explain how our actions hurt someone else, how it made them feel and asked how we would feel if it was done to us. She wanted to be sure we understood the repercussions of our actions, no automatic apology was expected. She knew we needed to feel it for it to really matter. I don’t think a lot of people take the time to do that these days. It’s just a reflexive “say you’re sorry” to the child without explanation. Doesn’t mean much that way. And then it perpetuates longevity for the behavior. This is a solid “got away from me ” piece

      • Thank you willow. I meant for it to be short and I don’t know what happened. But I agree with you. If you do not understand why you are saying it. It means nothing.

    • Terrific write Fia.

      Sorry is only one of the many words that leave our lips without any real truth or understanding.

    • good observational write. Well described. It is worth saving and recalling this write, for others too. A mantra to be wary of false words, including apologies.

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent musing my friend. Amazing observation as always. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.

      Damian

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    IN THE REALM OF EROTICA

      IN THE REALM OF EROTICA   We dive into the realm of erotica  where passion and desire  never cease where words  dance naked in front of us  and our bodies yearn to be released   We explore every inch of each other  In the depths of our souls...

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    play

    mannacle thought, make it your bitchdon't allow time, to give you lipnever hesitate demand your wayyour ego speaks for itself not one to be playedvixen be damnedshe's not the right onewhen there is nonetonight is yourstake midnight by the...

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    • The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.

    • This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡

      • hello beautiful Willow thank you lovely one I appreciate you thoughts these just uncurrents of feeling rising ❤️

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    I WRITE TO BREATHE

      Sometimes I don’t write for beauty.   I write because if I don’t, I’ll drown in silence. These words—they’re the only air I got left. So if you read me… just know— This ink’s my heartbeat.   For years, I’ve written without pause— sometimes with tears, sometimes with...

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    • To cool and it’s relatable to all that write, tight

    • Chère L.,
      Beauty.
      The Chinese version:
      Beauty in the woods, where no one can hear it, is still beautiful

      The greater Amsterdam version:
      Beauty which is shared with other people, grows

      It’s almost akin to:
      Sometimes giving away makes me richer.
      All this and more you gave us with this wonderful post.

      If you’re American: Thank you very much
      In all other cases: (please) keep on keeping on (Curtis Mayfield)
      Kind regards, Gus

    • Powerfully penned, Lizz. Excellent write nicely transformed into lyrics my friend. It’s the little differences between the two that gives them each their own personality, while mirroring each other’s point in substance. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    I’m Waiting

    I’m waitingThink I got ghostedNot the patient typeNothin left to do however It’s a first for meI’m sure she has a reason Giving her the benefit of the doubt A Scorpio however We’re direct Don’t play gamesOn / Off babeWhat’s it gonna be ?

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    • There’s nothing fun about being ghosted. I’ve learned to move on if I sense any games being played. Detachment is a hard lever to pull, but is often necessary.

    • Been there. Nice to see you back.

    • hello dearest Poet there are better to come I’m happy to see you ❤️

    • Passionately penned, Speak. I mean this is vintage you my friend. Nice to hear your wisdom on these things you’ve always got an interesting perspective on these matters. Great to see you back. Big Like.. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • DUP ended and I lost my voice or my passion to write but tiptoeing back in the water again. We’ll see

      Appreciate you D

    • Ugh, being ghosted SUCKS.
      You wrote this weeks ago and I’m only just seeing it because I step in here so infrequently… gosh it’s hard to find a substitute for DUP. There really is none.
      Glad to see your works again, though.
      ❤️k

    • I really don’t like the format on this site but the DUP crowd is here so I step in occasionally. Yeah, being ghosted blows. We’ve since reconnected slightly but it’s not the same at the moment.
      Thx Red
      We need to talk more !!!

      Dig you

      ❤️‍🩹

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