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Crimsin wrote a new post

• 6 months, 4 weeks ago

Hex

Poetry, Romance, Uncategorized

October 3, 2025

13

switching the mood, it is the witching hourmidnight drops upon me and I shudderyour specter comes a callingsending shivers along my spinepulses of pleasure overcome mesating a fantasy, I begin to chanta mantra really, calling you to mea spell...

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13 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Rock on, Love this crimsin
  - Crimsin
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    thank you graciously beautiful Fia I just love him ❤️
- Atticus Abbey
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Fantastic!
  - Crimsin
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Adagio for being here my attention in the site was waning due to lack of interaction… I appreciate you deeply today ❤️
- Adelphina
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  I love the rock god!!!
  So many great lines in this but I absolutely love flame of fright!!
  Cheers to the darkness!
  - Crimsin
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    hi beautiful Adelphina thank you so much I felt like I was hitting my flow by that time I’m glad you liked it ❤️
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Passionately penned, Brenda. Always a great write when music is involved in the story. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    hello dearest Damian yes he is an inspiration thank you for digging it ❤️
- RomaJ
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  I love the commanding voice in this poem! It isn’t a passive admirer; she’s a “Mistress,” an active conjurer of lust. The use of words like “Hexaba,” “culted lust,” and “sanctify the rite with orgasm” is brilliant for creating that sense of forbidden, consuming desire. A passionate wicked piece.
  - Crimsin
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    hello lovely poetess good evening thank you graciously for the love on this write ❤️
- Visions_of_Insanity
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Rob Fuckin Zombie Brenda!! Have you ever listened to White Zombie’s early material from the 1980’s? I personally think it’s horrible. Check it out if you haven’t. Awesome piece of writing. Love the chick…Sexy!!
- Knight
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Really intense images.
  I definitely saw a scene of the occult unfolding in these words.
  
  I both admire and fear witches.
  
  Regards James
  - Crimsin
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    he dearest James good morning thank you and don’t worry I’m not a practising witch though magic seems to come naturally from me have a good day today ❤️
Adelphina wrote a new post

• 6 months, 4 weeks ago

Strike a Lighter

Poetry, Romance

October 3, 2025

10

Arrived hand in handNo standing in line Got our backstage passLet’s make it lastNo stadium seatingOutside beneath the stars. Music’s ready to start We’re downing crown & cokeHe steps a little closerI’m moving a little slowerNah we should go fasterBaby...

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10 Comments
- Styxian
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Fine, Metallica it is, when next we bed together. What!
  I prefer Black Sabbath, but that’s some dark shit. I’ll get all trippy on ya. LOL
- Adelphina
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Promises promises.
  
  But I prefer to listen to Taylor Swift! Hahaha
  
  As long as I’m with you it doesn’t matter:)
- Crimsin
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  this is badass beautiful Adelphina and we both about rockers tonight… this is really cool ❤️
  - Adelphina
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Crimson! My first concert was Aerosmith.
    When the song Train Kept A Rolling came on the crowd went crazy!!
    Left a lasting impression.
    
    Thank you for stopping by lovely:)
- Fia Naturie
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Haha this is so cool. I can not tell you how many mosh pits erupt at the last Metallica concert I went to. From opening bands
  - Adelphina
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Hahaha. I just moved out of the way. lol.
    I love all the anarchy of it. Music has a way of taking you there!!!
    Thank you for the snaps!! Woop Woop!!
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! Gotta love a musical write that appreciates the mosh pit! Excellent work my friend. I knew Mark would bring up Sabbath! Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Adelphina
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Of course he’d bring up Sabbath. Hahaha
    He’s not a swifty fan, so I had to tease him about it. lol
    
    This was a fun write.
    I had the whole scene in my head playing out.
    
    Thanks for your snaps amigo!!
- Willow
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Girl, this has so much spirit in it. Sometimes the “just for fun” ones actually light up the room. Big smiles all around on this one.
  - Adelphina
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Hi Willow!! Long time no see chica:)
    I’m so happy you stopped by for a comment!
    This one kind of wrote itself. I love when that happens. That high is addicting! lol
    And that it made you smile is a bonus:)
    
    Thanks for stopping by!
Adelphina posted in the group Published Authors

• 6 months, 4 weeks ago

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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 6 months, 4 weeks ago

DWI =Do With Intention

Poetry

October 3, 2025

16

Wake up in the morning,with one goal in mind.How to feed my babies,without committing a crime. Everyone sees,But can not imagine.How easy it could be.How can this life happen? Never wanted a picket fence,or a house with a yard.All I could...

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16 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, I felt the sting of your words. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much Damian;))
- Styxian
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  We do what we must. Well, the good ones do! Like you.
  Speak your words, Fia. Take a bow and some praise. It ain’t easy out there. Luckily you’ve discovered the therapy of ceative writing. It DOES help. It can save souls, if we trust ourselves to focus on hope.
  Wonderful, uplifting write my dear.
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Styxian;)) We must focus on hope.
- Adelphina
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Man. I can relate to this. Not just myself but with my friends and family.
  There is no telling where I’d be without my mom. She is my rock.
  So empowering!! Thank you for posting !!
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Adel. It’s hard but worth it;))
- Willow
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  The kids are everything. And if they’re not…something ain’t right. Felt this one in my maternal DNA.
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Willow. They are everything.;))
- Paula Jobi
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Whatever it takes!
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Paula. you are right.
- Sam Dickens
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Life can be cruel and unfair, so I thank God for mothers like this. It is my great hope that their sacrifices will be rewarded–if not in this life, then the next.
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Sam. That is sweet;))
- Knight
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Life is a fight. You have invoked a great feeling of grit and determination.
  Regards James
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, I needed to hear that today.;))
- goldenmyst
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  I felt this deep in my marrow. Your dedication to those children renewed my faith in humankind. The struggle to keep your children fed and housed moved my heart deeply. This is truly one of your very best poems. It speaks to me of a mother’s love and her oh so protective spirit t keep her children safe, healthy, and well. This is much more than a poem it is a living breathing testament to a mother’s love. I loved this so much.
  
  John
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thank you, you think it’s one of my best.. appreciate that.
Drieks wrote a new post

• 6 months, 4 weeks ago

Remind me (song)

Audio & Video, Poetry

October 3, 2025

21

How did I forget your faceWhen I can still feel your embraceHow can I still smell youBut fail to recognize these pictures in which I held youMy disease is the worstAt least that's what people say when they remind...

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19 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Excellent lyrics my friend, your work is so authentic and direct. I’m truly a fan, good musical choice as well. The piano added the proper element to your words. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Drieks
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Damian. I always love reading your thoughts on my work. Appreciate you!
- Adelphina
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  I love a good piano song. This feels very intimate and un-rushed.
  It has a great tempo too. There are not a lot of distractions either. Just a voice and a piano.
  Just wonderful:)
  - Drieks
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much! Your words bring warmth to my heart ❤️
- Styxian
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Adelphina was raving about this to me earlier, so I had to check it out. And it’s really good! Not syrupy or overdone. It’s catchy and very entertaining. Awesome job with it.
  - Drieks
    6 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you for your kind words Styxian. I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it!
- Fia Naturie
  6 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Drieks, I smiled the whole way through listening to this. This was sad but catchy.
  - Drieks
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Fia! So happy to make you smile! 💕
- Willow
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  I man…damn. This is incredibly well done!
  - Drieks
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much Willow! ❤️
- Drieks
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thank you so much for your kind words!
  If only it was my own voice… Can’t take credit for that.
- Drieks
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  ❤️
- I_IS_ ME
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  We’ve kept up wit your musical success through mutual friends, and we’re truly happy for you. You’re not only creating great poetry but also great songs. Tight
  - Drieks
    6 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much for the kind words!
- RPM
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Great song. I loved the piano and the strength of the vocals. Well done!
  - Drieks
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you RPM! I appreciate it.
- FlatDaddy
  6 months ago
  
  Wow. Just wow! Another incredible piece. You are doing marvelous work, my friend. This is truly outstanding. Beautiful words, lovely music and all of it rendered with class. I am so glad that HER said I must talk to you. I would very much like to do that.
  - Drieks
    6 months ago
    
    Thank you so much! I’ll get back to you tomorrow if that’s ok 🙏🏻
    - FlatDaddy
      6 months ago
      
      Absolutely.
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