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Read MoreHoi hoi!An American friend wrote beautiful poems/lyrics for songs that didn’t happen.I thought it would be a very nice idea to change that.Plus, I could never write such a romantic poem!Listen closely please, this is romantic love!Not between Faith...
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Chère F.,
Thank you so very much for your listen!
It really means a lot!
Faith and I salute you!Warm regards, Gus
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This is really a fruitful and beautiful collaboration! The poem is intense and lovely, the music as always skillfully and artistically composed and arranged. Both of you did a wonderful job!
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Chère S.,
Hope this finds you well.And I love it very very much that you took the time to listen (and read).!
This is what dream pop/shoegaze is all about. Why treat the voice differently than any other instrument?
I’m looking forward to writing lots of music and hopefully another coop with you!
Also on behalf of Faith Maree, grateful for your listen.
Warme Wellen (sagt GTranslate that’s when I wave to you?) und
Herzliche Grüße, Gus
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I’m looking forward to further compositions of you, dear Gus! Of course, i would also appreciate a further collaboration with you.
In German there is a big difference between the substantive and the verb.
The wave = die Welle
To wave at someone = jemandem zuwinken. In German you can simply say
Herzlich (Warmly),
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Great collab. This is beautiful.
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Hi Kay
We’re grateful for you listen and comment.
Much appreciated!
Kind regards, Gus
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Hoi hoi do you write nonnettes too? Soms bijvoorbeeld nonettes.
Negen regels
1e regel negen lettergrepen
2e regel acht
Enz enz enz
Tot laatste regel één lettergreep.Eén op zijn kop nonette zal ook wel een naam hebben. Moet ik nog es uitzoeken.
Eze is er zo eentje en getiteld: Hé
Hé
Sorry
‘k Ben te jong
Om te weten
Hoe oud je nu bent
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Typo in the email address, sorry! Gus.bobbe@cloudemail.nl thanks the one.
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This is so beautiful, I can see why you both were complimented.