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twofiftythree posted in the group National Poetry Month
the willin fool
you place the blade
in my hand
and somethin in your voice
makes it feel right
somethin given just to me
b/c I earned itand I…
dumb enough to believe you…
hold it careful
watchin the light settle
along the surface
before bringin it to my mouth
slow
draggin my tongue
along the edge
tastin what you pro…Read More -
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Ghosteen wrote a new post
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Dear R,
This for me, makes me think of all the relationships that want desperately to succeed but are doomed from the start. Especially the ones fueled by addiction. The edgy gritty feel throughout this write is relatable for anyone trapped inside this carousel nightmare. I like the dark fast pace of this write. H 🌷
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Sappho (Elke) wrote a new post
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Nice one Elke. No forced rhymes here, which I always appreciate. Just a heart speaking out and looking for an answer.
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Beautifully penned, Elke. This is an excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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