This is sweet, Richard;))

Well, Dear Adira,
This, of course, is fiction, but in my imagination she did swoon, and then we made hot frothy love over and over amongst the caressing bubbles.
Ahhh-YES! That stanza is one of my faves, too … birds-of-a-feather! ; )

I’m so grateful for your deeelightful reviews, Adira, and for my new title, too.
Hugs ‘n other lovely stuff! ⁓ Rascal🖌

Beautifully penned, Daniel. Sensational write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wow you wrote this as if you were reliving it this moment. Incredible write.

Powerfully penned, Nick. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks, friend. Much appreciate the read.

Lies build and hurt. Also just expectations can weigh heavy.

Great powerful ink

A jack of all trades is a master of none is absolutely correct. powerful piece.

What an excellent write my friend. “Lies are a cancer that slowly kills the soul” that last line is the gospel…..

Powerful work.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

“Careless whispers spoken with a poison tongue…”

That is a powerful line right there! You set the tone with a hammer & then carried it home with a solid landing. A piece like this really needs no explanation. Damn, my friend…