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Thank you Joe. Isn’t it beautiful how music connects the world? Were all looking at the same moon river
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What a well done, strong write. Poetry is so broad, so I look for what moves me, and makes me nod, with approval.
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Appreciate the continued support Styx. I just enjoy grappling with words and metaphors.
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Cleverly penned, Ghosteen. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the kind words Damian
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Read MoreBeyond the breakers where the tides never reach, we watched a small child flying two kites and you said ‘that could be me and you’ Born still, midwife's mouth turned to scissors delivering the cruellest cut Sometimes, the sun rises in my bedroom at midnight the TV...
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Thank you’ I will not let death become me, until the grim reaper reads my rites.
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Read MoreI never asked to shoulder your weightBut here I amWith every burden I takeYou don’t give a damnYou assume I don't feelBecause you read what I wroteYou assume I am healedYou're wrong. I stand here brokeI strive every day to...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Could feel these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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There is true and honest pain here, so palpable I can almost touch it.
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Thank you Detritus ☺️
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A powerful piece written with heart blood. An empath can feel what is Hidden behind the words. Vibrations speak louder and clearer than words. Great work Fia!
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Thank you, Sappho, appreciate that:))
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One of the hardest things is trying to help and being pushed away.
Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick;))
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So true. I can write it down…to give me release for the moment at hand. But somethings live on forever. You can’t delete it. I wish I could. Oh no! Another thought coming on!!!
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I just wrote Edit My Life after writing my comment.
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Haha you were inspired? cool
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It seems that a lot of times, when I comment on someone’s work, the way I relate turns into my own next submission.
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It happens to me sometimes. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks
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I feel this. The weight of another persons sorrow. A moving piece.
Kind regards
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Thank you, James;))
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Read Moresound check and roll filmevery moment captured in memoryblack and white sorrow caught in stillifeamazing journey through the hurtblue tears streak a child's facemomma's gone and daddy became my heroyou know he tried so hard to protect me from...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Your words pulled on these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply on this I appreciate you 💕
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Your words have a way of slicing below the surface, to the core. The last two lines remind me of the lyrics, “ it’s better to burn out than it is to rust”. Keep shining, my friend.
I sincerely hope to meet you on the other side!
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thank you graciously dearest Gus for feeling me so deeply it’s appreciated 💕
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Read MoreYou will meetpeoplein life wholove to keep score."I've done this for you, soyou should do that for me."They keep a mental ledger.They're pathetic.Nothing is ever done out ofthe goodness of their heart.Their mind clicks withrecords and accounts.They are slaves...
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If they are keeping score like that, you would never break even. Nice piece
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Thank you. Yes.
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This is such an accurate telling. That quid pro quo system is so disappointing. And such a human trait, it seems
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Thanks, Willow
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Reminds me of the taxman. lol
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Sounds like capitalism to me, and the force-fed propaganda woven into our heads on a daily basis. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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yes. Thanks, my friend.
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I have known these people my friend. You write this very well, with insight into their character.
John
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Clever word play. I especially like the transition:
“In moon river dreams, my limbs drifted
from pillow to ache within the attic”
Excellent write.