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Read MoreCASSIE THE WHORE Cassie was a fourth generation whore.It didn't offend her. It was her life.She embraced the empowermentif being able to set a price on her body. She was able to charge more than her sister, mother and granny. Cassie...
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The house was torn down about 10 yrs ago. The funniest person I saw go in and out looked like Colonel Sanders with the white hair and clothes.
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I agree this could be done as a movie. Good write
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Paula, this is such a great story. Would make a perfect screenplay for a movie, I agree with the others. Actions packed, and uninhibited story telling. The plot unfolds with lots of surprises.
John
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Read MoreThe Shadow of You Sitting here thinking, drinking my Black and Tan contemplating the stormy motion I see in shadows ***** Yes, it’s dark in there but, occasionally you can see different shades of black mixing with greys and an undercurrent of blue. Sometimes, usually when you least expect it,...
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Powerful work. I felt this to the core of me.
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Thomas, thank you. Your presents is muchly appreciated
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This is a very beautiful work, my friend. I love your, “unruly midnight moon,” and there are so many other lines that touched me deeply; if I tried to mention them here I might as well write every line.
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Someone told me that to describe the feelings within shadow was a testament to writing good poetry. I don’t know about that, but I admit, I love this poem, the flow of it, and that you saw and felt it is warmly appreciated. I knew an artist friend who drew scenes in pencil. She had one piece, a landscape, done in black pencil that I swear when you looked at it deeply, you could see blue streaks flow in it. Some of that experience of seeing this piece of art is what I tried to capture in this poem and where that line: “…kaleidoscope of greys” came from.
Mary, thank you, your visits and comments mean a lot to me.
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FlatDaddy, it thrills me that you were touched by this poem. You might be surprised to know that unruly moon gets really rambunctious at midnight. Then again, we are the same age, so you probably know all about unruly moons. At any rate I truly welcome your visit and thanks for a great comment (and message).
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What would Paula do with $10k….DM me.
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Hmmmm? Hire someone to cook out at the local park and give away the food. Replace my bed and sofa. Buy curtains. New teeth. New shoes and clothes. All gone.
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I like the cook out and giveaway at the local park.Share some good luck around is a nice thought.
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Hoi hoi Paula,
Like this one a lot.I know for a fact that some sorts of giving makes me richer.
And practicing it for a very very long time.Keep them (the poems) coming please?
Kind regards, Gus
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Read MoreLove in the Time of Katrina II The air was stagnate with humidity, the pines and oaks stood stoically in the stillness and Medea fell hard for Jason. Betrayal like the eye of Katrina, was first calm until the wind changed, spread, increased, intensified. Medea gave everything, including her brothers, so Jason could flee with...
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Good story for a movie…..