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Read MoreA cold January nightit changed his whole lifeShe'd not been long his wifebut during the night she diedHelpless - he stands there all aloneLonely - a long hard way to go When they first met the angels sangIt was love...
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Appreciate you Damian.
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Thank you my friend. You rock!!
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Its amazing how love can cut so deep that you can’t take the knife out if you tried. Love this
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You nailed this one. Well said & well received.
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Thank you Vision 🙂
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Mic Drop!
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Thank you Damian 🙂
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Love the picture and the word execution. Perfect
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Thank you Fia 🙂
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Read MoreGod fearing patriots radicalisedRight in front of American eyes.Empowered with weaponsFaces covered by masksTo do the biddingThe orange man asks.So why aren't they terroristsAnd called to accountFor the clear acts of terrorThey continully mountIt's been done before way back in...
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Thank you for sharing this Peter. I’m not sure it needs another person’s ink. The raw emotion you put into this really hits home.
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Thank you.
I didn’t put much into it so appreciate your kind remarks.
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Preach on from the land down under. Great work Peter.
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Powerful piece. It’s always important to know history and seeing how that turned out. I think after this administration is done, we’ll have trials and there we’ll find out more of the evil that men/women did. My heart goes out to those broken families and protesters voicing for the voiceless.
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I appreciate the effort, Peter — but I don’t much care for the AI voice reading it when the “LISTEN” voice is clicked. How many pages do you have that on?
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Read MoreUnjust jealousyhas taken over meI cannot believethat you cannot seethat he is for me I will channel this rageas my pen flies across the pageThere is no smoke or sageThat will bless what is coming in spades You need to understandWhen...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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hello beautiful Fia this is perfectly written and it’s true older women no more how to please a man I like an older man myself combined with a little arrogance great write ❤️
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🩷thank you crimsin
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Love the flow first. but also the attitude of claiming what’s yours. Tight
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Thank you Me 😉
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This is honest, real and demanding. Well said Fia.
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Thank you, Vision;)
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That flow and to the point understanding hit straight on
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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I love this one, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus
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This is raw possession and feral confidence on the page—jealousy sharpened into language instead of apology.
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Thank you, Thomas
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I’m digging the attitude and confidence. Telling it like it is in your own sense of style.
Back off my man! This is fun to read and had a swag urban feel to it.
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Haha Thank you. I guess I was really feeling this piece
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That’s tellen her. When Fia lays down the law, watch out! lol Nice one. 🙂
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Well, thank you, Tim.
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“There’s something that comes with age and time” there is something about this line that speaks with stoicism and control which also lets a little leeway to catch a case.
I loved the underlying theme, she may try tempt him but you have his heart.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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This is a subtle warning huh. LOL.
You make it seem “nice” because it rhymes. But so does “sharp” and “harp” -which is what they will be playing when you finish them off. LOL.
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Thank you, Styxian;)) Not so subtle I guess
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian