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Read MorePsychosis carried in the gales,for I am surely windblown,windward from my own psyche,where boundaries of reality have eroded.With concealed hands,a nonvisual hallucination caressesthe encasement of my soul,provoking verbal responses.Nothingness which wreathes around me,a curve in a state of nonexistencemeandering...
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Read MoreHe workedHe workedHe workedand worked He drankHe drankHe drankand drank His job wasn't to far from his homeHe would walk home the same route every dayIt wasn't the greatest neighborhoodHobo's were always near the liquor store he would stop by each...
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You told the story of this man with great power and a really strong and surprising ending. You clearly know the art of poetic story telling well.
John
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Hello John. Thank you so much for the read & the kind words. Appreciated.
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And the moral of the story is…..wait till your sober before going home.
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HA! Thanks Adira.
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Oh so true sire. Thanks!!
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Read MoreShe was the woman with no nameShe came in when they were leaving their offices to go home for the daySome of the staff tried to be polite and say hello in passingShe never said a word backShe would...
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You painted this picture like a scene on television. I like this.
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Thank you Fia. Appreciated!!
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You have a sensitivity and caring for this character that really must come from your compassionate soul. Loved this portrait you painted in verse.
John
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Hello John You’re comments inspire. Thanks a bunch!!
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Hello Adira. Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate you!!!
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Read More"Tie me off sweetheart", she said. Sure honey sweetie baby, I love to watch you vomit Don't get any on my shoes Oh fuck it, I'm so in love with you I even love your puke You have the...
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Thank you HJ Furl. Appreciated!
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You paint these people with unflinching description that really makes me feel for them. And there is a slightly humorous tone here which I like. Really find scenes you paint of the underworld of our cities. Love reading your poetry tonight.
John
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Correct. I’m quite satirical with my poems. Thank you very much John.
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DARK AND FEROCIOUS.
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
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Appreciate that Thomas. Thanks!!
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This piece turns so well…
Word selection totally opens
up the experience…
Righteous darkness…
Inspiring to me…
I am writing a story
about a group of poets
who commit group
suicide…
Was gonna be three
ladies, who learn
one of them dying…
Inspired by Eerie…
But then I decided
I would need more
bodies to qualify
for:
Group suicide.
Hahaha.
I started the
story in first
person narrative
but I am thinking
of pulling out
of that and going
into omniscient,
if that’s even possible…
🙂
Nicely done Daniel…