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hello beautiful Fia this is so passionate and painful I only hope it is fiction love can be cruel 💕
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Thank you, crimsin. Yes it is fiction. I am glad you felt something from this. xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Simply amazing write my friend, you changed it up a little on this one. Excellent! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I always want to try something new. Always appreciate your comments.
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Awww, Fia =(
How poignantly vivid your pen has laid its sorrows’ disappointments upon our hearts … so many times we’ve gone through such relatably plaintive ache, yet, your poetic emotion expresses it all so vividly, as though it could be any one of us experiencing your own moments of disquiet.
“Love is a demon’s creation.
It obscures and twists the mind,
That being in complete submergence is good.”Oh, yes! Nothing’s like LOVE it when it’s good, when all is wine and roses; for, love shall seek not but for its own satisfaction. It will bend and twist you, and shine and dim upon you, while holding onto those within its grip. And, there is no single answer to the question of what love really is, but I have learned that when love is in control, there are no guarantees.
I so admire the smoothness and imagery with which you paint emotions, feeling, and thoughts upon the canvas our minds, hearts, and souls … the hallmarks of a true artist’s touch.
Swearing we’ll never fall in-love again, our needs are far too deep not to.
Beautiful work, Dear Poetess … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌Superb artwork choice:
(V2L1, add an apostrophe to Passion’s)-
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“Excellent use of metaphor, too.”
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Read MoreShe danced alone in the streets.Oblivious to 'their' stares.'They' said she was mad.But 'they' just couldn't hear the music.
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this is beautiful dearest Benny 💕
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Thank you for reading.
Find the song by Sting called They Dance Alone.
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Even if they could hear it, some of them would still say it. Imaginations in full stagnation. This is lovely. Really builds the visual beautifully
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Thanks and I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙏
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I am madly enthralled and peaked by this loveliness. The depth is Everything. Umph.
Gentle man, thank you for whispering this one upon us❤️
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Sometimes, if I’m lucky,the words come out and please others.
I’m glad you enjoyed my words.😘
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreEverything’s going up in smoke tonight Temperature is rising from the fire below Speaking in curses to mask such delight While momentum has started to plateau Positive thinking can only lead one so far Losing ground to a pack of assorted lies On the face...
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damn good write
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ambjr. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I know this was written in time passed, but I believe you’re saying you move to the beat of a different drum. I feel you, because so do I.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on, I knew I had company. You’re very welcome, and thank you for commenting. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how things are pulled from Damian’s vault. This is good.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I thought all writers have a vault? Don’t tell me I missed another meeting. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This one took me somewhere…the smell of sulfur & the rising burn of hell beneath the feet. All I can say is, they spread their propaganda but nothing’s stopping us from spreading truth. Who knows what could happen when enough voices shout it? Your vault must be a gold mine, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Keen observation skills and a great sense of smell, you possess there. There is nothing stopping us from spreading the truth, it’s all I strive to do. My writing is so steeped in exposing the truth, even as a young writer, once I found my calling I knew it. So you can count me in. The vault has some good stuff in there, it also is the resting place for some not so good writes. In all honesty, I’m a hoarder I don’t even through my worst stuff away. Some have been known to be retooled and rereleased, others can’t be saved, but they tell my journey as a writer. I am also sentimental. I still have my first notebook of work, from when I was 15 years old. And it was terrible. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You nailed it. Good writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The gospel truth.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
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Read MoreTwo hearts, both alike in rhythm,share a tomb - a tomblike existence, indeed! While our meetings are forbidden!A place where no one will suspect us.And within this tomb we share lips.
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“Within the tomb we share lips,” that is a never-ending romance.
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hello dearest Daniel this is really darkly great 💕
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Gothically penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Hj xoxo