hi dearest Keith Happy Birthday?

this is very good but dark ❤️

Death makes life easier somehow…. WOW….now why didn’t I think of that

Visions this goes deep. I could feel the emotions of the narrator as he spoke. Fine work.

John

Powerfully penned, Keith. This read like a letter left to fuck with cops kinda vibe. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Keith so dark you know they always look best in gray ❤️

Hauntingly penned, Keith. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Zombies, always wondered why they stopped eating. If a bite turns them why continue to chew. Hmm? Nice

Powerfully penned, Keith. Nothing like an old fashioned zombie flick. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello lovely Fia I know you are here for us…I comment a lot and people are responding…at du for a long time I was unpopular because of my schizo episodes and really I couldn’t help it…you would think I woudn’t write duringn those periods but oh no not me lol… thank you dear lady ❤️

I think we’re all thankful you’re here, Fia. I always try to comment on other poems when I can. That’s what makes this a community.

We all need you Fia… we all need one another… still you are one of a kind

Passionately penned, Fia. I always dig your musings my friend. Thank you for everything you do for our community. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Hoi hoi
I love it a lot how you care for us. And thank you so much for that.

But am I (being?) out of place when I ask for you to take more time to write goodies for yourself?

Think of the stewardess in a plane. They point out to first put that mask over your face and after that tend to other people.
I honestly believe the stewardess’ filosophy. And I hope that I can convince you to become a believer too. Wink wink.

Please don’t forget yourself.
Warm regards, Gus

I bow to you with gratitude for your tireless dedication to our community, dear Fia!
For many of us writing is an invaluable contribution to maintaining mental balance. Pouring out your heart in a poem or a story brings great relief and satisfaction.
I appreciate very much that you cover all topics with your writing. Literature must not be restricted in its freedom of expression!
Once again, thousands of thanks for all your efforts and your marvelous poetry, my friend!

With gratitude and appreciation, I thank you for all that you do and are, Fia. Fearless and honest, your writing inspires us to share parts of ourselves we might otherwise shove aside, forgotten. Thank you, my friend!

Clay

TY

Due to my feral childhood, manners were late being learned. So now I’m a relic from another time who opens doors for people and always says please and thank you. As it applies to writing, I always appreciate it when someone takes the time to read and comment on my work, and will always thank them. Your fine poem is much food for thought, and I embrace every word.

Peace to you Fia. You’ve been the core of this site. Your determination, passion and love for poetry, writing and the community here, does not go unnoticed. Keep up the great work you’ve done here on starsrite.

That’s how I feel. Poetry is our voice. So many people don’t use that voice or give it up. I know it can get discouraging but it can help someone. Also it just feels good to get those feelings out regardless of subject.

Wonderful write.

Sweet descriptive piece with hints of longing

Hello John,

Your description here captures the atmosphere so perfectly. Your detail is always so razor sharp. Nice work.

Beautifully penned, John. Phenomenal imagery my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your poem puts me in the mood of sailing and travel, the image of a sailor who is watching and expressing the scenes, keeping it in his head because soon it will only be a memory. There is sadness going along all the lines. Emotionally written.

Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

Inspiration can come from many places, but to be able to create something like this is exceptional, John. Great poem with creative images. 🙂