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Read MoreP=Romeo, what makes you so sad? R=My emotions are my own why do you ask? P=I hoped life was treating you kinder than it did before R=Before when? When my love walked out the door. P=Why not open your heart for someone new....
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Thank you Cuz:))
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nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)
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Thank you Sam. Really a play? Maybe lol
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I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.
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Thank you Kay-1
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I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..
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Thank you Neville. I was sitting here thinking of how he would sound and feel if things were different. I may try my hand at writing a play, but I want his voice to stay true to the original. It’s a thought.
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All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.
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It’s bright and sunny for Romeo because Juliet’s back huh? lol Thank you Sam;)
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Read Moremeditating in the energy I secret my deepest feelingsallowing them to rise as incencehigh and higher into the heavenswhere they are understoodwith vibrations of recognitionI'm remembered fondlysacred art of the wayto sing in poetryit is the language of the...
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Crimsin I enjoyed this piece and the picture is amazing.
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thank you graciously beautiful Fia I really try to match the picture with the poem I’m happy you liked this ❤️
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thank you graciously dearest Styxian I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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This is very beautiful. I want to read this constantly now. Thank you 🙂
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hello dearest Brandon I’m so happy you liked this thank you graciously❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write with a spiritual vibe my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Daman thank you graciously for your support ❤️
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“The onyx kingdom welcomes me” is lovely and profound. You have laced your words into a contemplative journey throughout this piece. Very nice.
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hello lovely poet thank you graciously and welcome ❤️
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This is cool. I relate to the nervous energy at times I just keep going.;))
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Hello lovely Fia thank you graciously for the love ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Chère C.,
A little rhyme replying your lovely poem:This photo’s truly showing
What I always knowed*
Parking on the sidewalk is
How to define off roadSo rope in a big wheel
and you’ll be certain of
One big wheel will be enough
If you want lasting loveClumsy? Yes!
But so what!
There’s more than enough people who take themselves too seriously…*Dion Dimucci’s past sense of knowing
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lol I love your offbeat poem I’ve never really been one for money but if I can make some from my artistic edeavors who knows thank Gus ❤️
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D. Ignatov and
Jim River are now friends
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Read MoreIn the cancer year I bled like a thief, postmortem without a corpse The night she lost her hair tears of piers across the valleys crying for the days which will be no more, one bridge way too far When one was hurting silently the other one knew loudly; the afternoon deputy cancer-bastard pulled the shotgun...
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I cannot imagine the pain and the dreams that come out of it.
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cancer is the loneliest hunter. thanks for the sentiments. fia
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Powerfully penned, Ghosteen. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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many thanks damian. of all the sites i have ever vistied, you are the most supportive & encouraging. says much about you as a person.
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That’s kind of you to say my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dear R,
This years at my heart strings. Makes me think of Eerie. And my heart bleeds. This piece is so strong it has its own pulse. H 🌷
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diolch H. when a kind soul such as yourself emotionally responds to my tatty words, it makes it worthwhile. eerie touched your heart, that is all we can ask in this trapeze and circus we call life. x
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“When one was hurting silently
the other one knew loudly; ” – This is actually very clever and damn accurate. Props for that bit of genius.
The write itself is brutally honest and centered once for heart and once for the head. This is why I search your writes out, for the skill. Awesome write, Rob.-
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you are not exactly bereft of writing skills yourself my friend. far from it.
that’s twice cancer has sliced my heart. moving on with so much love delivered to my spine.
thanks too for the ‘comments’ insight.
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian