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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreIf I had to think of when we first metAll I can think of is the darknessThe waking hours are my sanctuaryYou invaded the sanctuaryYou’ve never said a wordI just knew when you were thereAll of my fight was...
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Thank you, Sappho. appreciate that;))
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A well written poem that reminds me of all those near death experiences I got on 07:00 am.
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Thank you M.E
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Cool piece. Well said & executed. Sleep well zzzzzzz
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Forever it will be bookmarked! What do you think? Does it have the same punch as my old catchphrase? lol. Seriously though great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You know, if you read this poem quickly, it gives me the impression that she had to get it out because something imminent is about to happen. Good spill
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Wonderfully executed. Nice work.
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I like the way the commas
hold the piece together…While the line breaks
moderate the rhythm…Nice metapoetics…
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Brilliantly penned, LDF. Love the flow. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreHere we are at the nighmare paradeafter hours you hear cries in the nightthe shadows fall as you witness ghosts of the midwayliving dolls steal your soulyou dare to ride the haunted carousel?calliope plays mysteriously in the foregroundthe circus...
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Damn, the last line is like a lid slamming down on a coffin after the rest of the poem. Actually a very valid reminder in this world
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Thanks Willow. Appreciate the kind words.
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Wow, this is a wild ride you have taken us on with your poem! Your socially critical observation of this world is brilliantly penned and enjoyable sarcastic!
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Always sarcasm Sappho. Good to see you here.
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Oof! What a haunting vision you’ve painted us with mere words, Vision.
I LOVE IT! xx
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Hello P.G Thanks for the kind words and feedback.
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Always a pleasure dear. xx
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Thanks Adira. Great to hear from you.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This one has grit, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the comments Damian. Thanks!!
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Read MoreOne day a dog bit the index finger of his masterthe dog ran off with a bloody finger,before the master could catch him the dog came to a river and went onto a wooden dockthe dog looked down into the...
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Phenomenal write, Keith. I should think he would learn from his mistake, and keep the dog fed. Great story my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You would think, but he didn’t. Thanks Damian.
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Great idea to address sleep personally, dear Fia! Your deep reflections are touching and very well written!