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Read Moretwas daylight that ushered the darkness inwhen she on a sleepy day did sinsecreting my thoughts and dreaded deedon halted breath my wickedness shownsilently the storm brew coming without warningclouds of mistrust formed in the eyes peering at memy...
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hello lovely Kitten good morning thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian yeah just a bit of fiction I appreciate you too 💕
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congratulations all around 💕
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Congrats to all. Appreciate you all.
Damian
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Thank you and congratulations to the others! 😃
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Keep up the intensity. Peace to all
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Thank you! And Congrats fellow poets! “)
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Congrats all….
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Described ‘the black dog’ perfectly.
Sleep well
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously for reading and commenting with such an apt description of depression I’d never heard that expression before 💕
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I think it was how Winston Churchill described his depression.Most folks down under use it as a euphemism for depression.
Take care 😘
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You really nailed this diagnosis, girl.
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hello beautiful Kitten you are appreciated thank you 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hi dearest Damian good afternoon thank you graciously 💕
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Read MoreThe morning sunlight of purity rushed in as Hilda's mother brushed aside white bedside curtains, the heavens bathing her daughter. Hilda's eyelids shot open to the beauty. Her mother's stout silhouette, before a backdrop of a gold and cyanic blue sky, sat herself beside her daughter. "God...
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Damn… that’s depressing.
Some people can’t be helped. They just keep taking, and you have to build a wall.-
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Met a few people that just take and take. They’ll bring you down if you don’t build that wall. Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Some people are users my friend, they’re in it as long as it’s an asset to them. Once you can’t be that for them any longer, they’ll put you out to pasture. And find someone who can, it’s a never ending cycle of revolving friends for them. I speak from experience. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Met a few that get through life by using others. Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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Oh wow… I’d call this epic poetry because it tells a story. It’s also confessional.
I love this kind of naughty stuff, Crimsin. Riveting!