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    Silent Agreement

    would you be there if you found out I wasn't that rich? I grew up poor had to fight for what I got I'll never be the one with a lot of cash but what I have, I earned is that worth something to you? would...

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    • What I love about this piece is emotional intimacy… the shit you talk about at the end of a weekend vacation before Monday morning rolls around and bites you in the butt. You’re looking out over the horizon just wondering what tomorrow will bring, and it’s time to get real about where we are going. Are you with me or not? Am I really what you want? You brace yourself and pray for plain English after laying out your limitations.

      I feel the anxiety and sense the reassurance. It’s well written, Nick.

      • I usually tell people that love takes a lot of hell to get to heaven. You have to be willing to go through that with that person. And I definitely have the experience.

        Thanks for the read, friend.

    • Powerfully penned, Nick. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    sinful deed

    twas daylight that ushered the darkness inwhen she on a sleepy day did sinsecreting my thoughts and dreaded deedon halted breath my wickedness shownsilently the storm brew coming without warningclouds of mistrust formed in the eyes peering at memy...

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    • Oh wow… I’d call this epic poetry because it tells a story. It’s also confessional.
      I love this kind of naughty stuff, Crimsin. Riveting!

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you dearest Damian yeah just a bit of fiction I appreciate you too 💕

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    blue

    in the deafening noise I cloak my hurtmy pain is not for public viewit is a heavy weight to smile when you're saddarkness lingers in all I dodepression stalks my stepsaltered perceptions nothing is the samea bite of food...

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    • Described ‘the black dog’ perfectly.
      Sleep well
      🙏

      • hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously for reading and commenting with such an apt description of depression I’d never heard that expression before 💕

        • I think it was how Winston Churchill described his depression.Most folks down under use it as a euphemism for depression.
          Take care 😘

    • You really nailed this diagnosis, girl.
      I felt kind of rough after reading it. Everyone can relate to this.

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Gothic Queen: Part Two, New Servant Girls

    The morning sunlight of purity rushed in as Hilda's mother brushed aside white bedside curtains, the heavens bathing her daughter.   Hilda's eyelids shot open to the beauty. Her mother's stout silhouette, before a backdrop of a gold and cyanic blue sky, sat herself beside her daughter.   "God...

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