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Read MoreYour hips and thighsNeed to feel my palmsGladly I will serve youReceive and relish this timeBare your teethLet me see the defianceLet me hear that inner growlWe are not going to stop tonightYou will be worn out before meStruggle...
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No it wasn’t;)) Thank you Damian
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The ink is dark, but screaming. I like it, Fia.
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Thank you, Atticus;)
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A fearsome statement. Full of fire.
Regards James-
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Thank you, James;)
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OMG! what an aperitif for dark pleasures to come, Fia xx
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Thank you, Hj;)
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend and this is the tamed down version? This was fire. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Yes it is. haha. Thank you cuz. :))
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Read MoreWhat would happen if time stood still Would a tear still drop Would the heart still beat Would that moment still be etched in memory Words can never be taken back When both cheeks are slapped there is no other to give Wounds that are...
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Nice write Fia.
I’m not sure if time even exists in the universe…..seems like a human construct.
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It might be. I find it weird its never enough time. Thank you Peter 😊
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Unfortunately some live in snow globes. Frozen in the same memories and misfortunes.
A well written, thought provoking poem, with a good concept. Well done, Fia! “)-
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Snow globes …well that’s a thought. To be stuck in that one time and place
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Im trying new ways to inspire myself. 😊
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Chère F.,
How have you done this, with almost each line/sentence a different perspective.
You always seem to surprise me and it looks like maybe it’s surprising you that you do.
What a lovely way to start a new week!
Love it to bits!
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It is inspiring me. Pushing me a bit to see things differently. Thank you Gus 😊
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To me, time as a gift. None of us knows, how long their lives will last. I think, it is most important to use the gift of time we receive to find out who we are, why we are here and how to live a life in harmony and at peace with ourselves and all of creation.
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Thank you so much, Elke;))
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No idea
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Read MoreP=Romeo, what makes you so sad? R=My emotions are my own why do you ask? P=I hoped life was treating you kinder than it did before R=Before when? When my love walked out the door. P=Why not open your heart for someone new....
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Cuz:))
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nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)
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Thank you Sam. Really a play? Maybe lol
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I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.
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Thank you Kay-1
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I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..
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Thank you Neville. I was sitting here thinking of how he would sound and feel if things were different. I may try my hand at writing a play, but I want his voice to stay true to the original. It’s a thought.
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All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.
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It’s bright and sunny for Romeo because Juliet’s back huh? lol Thank you Sam;)
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Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write that’s fire my friend. This one wasn’t for the tame of heart.. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian