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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Read MoreThis Wednesday with be the first of a series of classes in the Back-to-Basics group. The first class is on sonnets.This is for those who want to learn how to write one and for those who already written one...
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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interestin
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Read MoreI'm one of those guys who wanders through abandoned homes notorious for their fearsome hauntings. I traipse through rooms with caution, though; the floors beneath my shoes often crackle from debris, creating a false sense of security. You see,...
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Hauntingly penned, Tim. Logic over valor my friend. Excellent write you’re a great storyteller. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much, Damian. 🙂
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This is good and had me laughing with the pedal to the metal.
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haha, thanks for checking it out, Fia. 🙂
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Tim, this took me into the haunted rooms of that house and feeling the disquieted vibes as I read. Truly a master work of short story telling. Your descriptions of the broken window and dusty curtains made the scene come alive for me in full visual effect. As the story unfolded I enjoyed the narration and how it pulled me into the story. Truly great ghost story telling that had me fascinated unto that great ending where the message appears on his phone.
John
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Thanks very much for the comment, John. it’s much appreciated.
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Love this! Also, great music taste!
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Hi Drieks!
I LOVE your taste in music so to know we are in tune with our tunes made my day!
This was my version of the song. lolI’m a huge fan of Queens of the Stone Age.
I’m also a huge fan of Brody Dalle:)Thanks for stopping by my rose patch friend:)
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I’m not familiar with Brody Dalle. Looks like I have some homework to do! Thank you for pointing me towards artists that are new to me. I love discussing music. Have a wonderful day ❤️
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She was married to the lead singer of Queens of the Stone Age. Divorced now but I love her music! This is one of my faves.
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I’m so glad you mentioned her. I’ve been putting her songs on my playlist one after the other. Thank you!
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Dark and dragged kicking, we love it Lady
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Hey Meme!
Thank you, thank you!
I was in a mood when I wrote this lol
I love females who can kick some ass. HahahaLater gator!
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An army of you?! The world isn’t ready! LOL
This is rockin! I like the edginess of it, too. It shows a side of you that doesn’t get aired much. The grit and the power-punch lines. I love it! That’s my girl! (Woman!)
Keep that fire baby, you’re going to need it soon! What!-
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Hahaha, an army of me would be fabulous if I do say so myself.
We would storm all the Pandora jewelry stores! HeheheI’ve been told I look like other people! Stopped in the mall and all kinds of stuff. True story!
Thanks for all the encouragement and support babe.
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I already explained to you why people think that you’re a TV personality etc. Because you have so much in common with what it takes. The charisma and personality. The looks, obviously.
Yadi yadi yadi. Don’t be getting all smug and self-righteous on me! Lol
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Aww thank you but you are biased! lol
Self-righteous never, smug on rare occasions!
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This is a rip up the road poem. A take no prisoners poem! A plasma TV for the ship’s deck matte poem! Walk the plank on roller skates poem. Eat a box of pop tarts in one sitting poem. A half-gallon of chocolate milk in one chug poem. lol Good one.
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Hahah. I love the energy of your comment! Woop Woop!
Thank you for catching my vibe buddy.
If I remember correctly you were the one who said I have a doppelgänger on DUP!Roller skating off a plank! In real life I’m a klutz! I’d roll off before I get to the end. 😂
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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Powerfully penned, Adel. Love the vibe and attitude of this write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damien.
What can I say, I was in a mood when I wrote this. lol
I’m glad you enjoyed my clone wars! 😝Have a great day!
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Love the music vibes. Great ink.
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Hey Nick:)
Thank you! Something about music always gets me motivated to write.
Thanks for stopping by!
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Superb work.
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Hi Thomas! Thank you! I was in a mood. Lol
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreHello This is going to be a short update. We are currently looking for a permanent IT person to handle issues when they occur. At the moment we do have a list of items that we are working on. *One person brought...
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Thanks for you efforts dear. 🤎
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Thank you, Jim
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I love this place. So many sweet and fabulously talented folk!
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Thanks for the update, Fia. Thank you for all that you do my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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You’re welcome, Damian
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Thanks for including me in the loop too Fia .. and for the amount of work that you do on our behalf behind the screens .. Neville 😎🌻
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Your welcome, Neville;))
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You are doing a great job Fia. We know that you have other things to tend to as well, so taking the time to run things here is appreciated.
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Thank you, Styxian;))
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.