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Hi Drieks!
I LOVE your taste in music so to know we are in tune with our tunes made my day!
This was my version of the song. lolI’m a huge fan of Queens of the Stone Age.
I’m also a huge fan of Brody Dalle:)Thanks for stopping by my rose patch friend:)
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I’m not familiar with Brody Dalle. Looks like I have some homework to do! Thank you for pointing me towards artists that are new to me. I love discussing music. Have a wonderful day ❤️
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She was married to the lead singer of Queens of the Stone Age. Divorced now but I love her music! This is one of my faves.
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I’m so glad you mentioned her. I’ve been putting her songs on my playlist one after the other. Thank you!
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Dark and dragged kicking, we love it Lady
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Hey Meme!
Thank you, thank you!
I was in a mood when I wrote this lol
I love females who can kick some ass. HahahaLater gator!
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An army of you?! The world isn’t ready! LOL
This is rockin! I like the edginess of it, too. It shows a side of you that doesn’t get aired much. The grit and the power-punch lines. I love it! That’s my girl! (Woman!)
Keep that fire baby, you’re going to need it soon! What!-
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Hahaha, an army of me would be fabulous if I do say so myself.
We would storm all the Pandora jewelry stores! HeheheI’ve been told I look like other people! Stopped in the mall and all kinds of stuff. True story!
Thanks for all the encouragement and support babe.
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I already explained to you why people think that you’re a TV personality etc. Because you have so much in common with what it takes. The charisma and personality. The looks, obviously.
Yadi yadi yadi. Don’t be getting all smug and self-righteous on me! Lol
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Aww thank you but you are biased! lol
Self-righteous never, smug on rare occasions!
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This is a rip up the road poem. A take no prisoners poem! A plasma TV for the ship’s deck matte poem! Walk the plank on roller skates poem. Eat a box of pop tarts in one sitting poem. A half-gallon of chocolate milk in one chug poem. lol Good one.
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Hahah. I love the energy of your comment! Woop Woop!
Thank you for catching my vibe buddy.
If I remember correctly you were the one who said I have a doppelgänger on DUP!Roller skating off a plank! In real life I’m a klutz! I’d roll off before I get to the end. 😂
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Adel. Love the vibe and attitude of this write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damien.
What can I say, I was in a mood when I wrote this. lol
I’m glad you enjoyed my clone wars! 😝Have a great day!
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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
Love the music vibes. Great ink.
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Hey Nick:)
Thank you! Something about music always gets me motivated to write.
Thanks for stopping by!
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Superb work.
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Hi Thomas! Thank you! I was in a mood. Lol
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreHello This is going to be a short update. We are currently looking for a permanent IT person to handle issues when they occur. At the moment we do have a list of items that we are working on. *One person brought...
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Thanks for you efforts dear. 🤎
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Thank you, Jim
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I love this place. So many sweet and fabulously talented folk!
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Thanks for the update, Fia. Thank you for all that you do my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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You’re welcome, Damian
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Thanks for including me in the loop too Fia .. and for the amount of work that you do on our behalf behind the screens .. Neville 😎🌻
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Your welcome, Neville;))
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You are doing a great job Fia. We know that you have other things to tend to as well, so taking the time to run things here is appreciated.
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Thank you, Styxian;))
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Tim wrote a new post
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Read MoreJoshua Daniel's hands wore thick calluses and he didn't smile much. At age thirty-two, he worked in fields and chopped wood. The blood, toil, and sweat made him tough. On the 28th of June, under the big oak tree at...
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Phenomenally penned, Tim. You’re a great storyteller my friend, felt like a western to me. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian.
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This does give a western vibe. I like the listening to the tree to hear the screaming.
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Thanks very much, Fia. 🙂
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I normally do not read the short story section, but I was curious, so…
Revenge is sometimes blinding. This write shows that to be true.
Your story reads fluid, interesting, carrying the scenes forward really well. The epilogue (of sorts) leaves the reader pondering, perhaps for a continuation.
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I appreciate your comment, Styx. Thanks very much. 🙂
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This was very engaging. Some of those dead have unfinished business. Great ink.
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Thank you very much, Nick. 🙂
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Hi Tim!
This reminds me of an episode of Hell on Wheels! And the pic really reinforces the tone of the story.
Gritty with emotion and guns. How it was back then. Black and white with a lot of dust instead of grey.
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Thank you for the nice comment, Adelly. Much appreciated. 🙂
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Tim you have mastered the art of putting so much action, plot development, and powerfully emotional story telling into the short story form. This takes you into the heart of Joshua and his tragic mistake leading to his ending. Gritty and strong telling of this tale that engaged me as I read. Not a line wasted. A perfect economy of words that brings this tale home in a big way.
John
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Wow, thank you, John. I couldn’t have asked for a better comment. 🙂
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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Powerful stuff Fia
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Thank you,Peter;))
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Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Heartfelt in a new way
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Thank you, Jim;))
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“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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Love this! Also, great music taste!