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Read MoreI am alone with those awful voices. Nay, you reader have a real voice! Those hallucinations are evil static! But I find, that I may find a way out. And then away for home, to what home was meant to be! Away from these cursed voices! Away...
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Fantastic piece man. Your writing is one long dark journey. Love it!
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Oh my life has been one long, dark journey. Writing since age 10 has helped me cope with psychosis. Sometimes I write what I hallucinate. Sounds crazy but it’s true. Again, thank you.
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Nothing is crazy. What you see and believe, go with it. Your writing is exceptional!
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling my friend. It’s sometimes wild how much power the mind wields. Thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreYeah,Vicky.I left a hicky on her neck.Back in the city,I wrote my number on the cheque.Very risky,like tempting Russians in roulette.Plenty sticky.Oh Vicky.Chest of might.Catch of delight.Eye sight’s over-pleasured,break my dyke.Pluck the brains back of the matte blackbarrel, left...
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This kicks ass. Marvelous lyrics and a wicked image.
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Thank you 🙏🏻
It means a lot coming from you.
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Thank you Adira! Yeah it’s been a blast.
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Phenomenal lyrics, Drieks. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreMidway through my life, I cannot go on. Middle of a winter storm, too blind to trek on. The struggle of having to embrace psychosis, has been very painful, rendering me blind. Blind and deaf to a world that rejected me, blind and deaf...
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These poems are so damn dark and unsettling. GREAT!
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the honesty and pain my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe morbid hue of death awaited uswhen I made that last promise to you.Vanity! I already sensed the vanity,that delicate moment when our trust lived. For the life of me, however, I don't know why.Why I let go, why I...
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I like how you ask for forgiveness . Nice Daniel. 😊
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Yeah. It felt great this morning writing this.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. I could feel this one my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreExplaining to A Leaf~ loneliness ~With winds stalking me,leaves tremble at my approach,they are afraid of the coldthat follows:and, in hushed rustling whispers,they ask, as I pass,“Why is it you’re not afraid?”Un-answering, my feet march on,trodding on their fallen...
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I’m hugely impressed with your understanding of poetic element.
So, you are Richard the Rascal. Let me put that down. This is another amazing piece with emphasis on personification and symbolism. There’s obviously a metaphorical significance to the changing season, specifically fall to winter. It’s interesting to note that while you give leaves many characteristics of humans in this piece, they lack the unique capacity for understanding… at least, that’s the perspective of the speaker. Your final stanza is a fantastic summation.This is top shelf material, Richard.
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Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂
Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌
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Hi, M’Good Friend! ✌🏼
How great it is, Tim, to be greeted here with one of your appreciatively expressed and inspiringly encouraging reviews, that always seems to grasp my poetry’s core essence.
Yes, like You, I tend to enjoy a good dose of metaphoric imagery in my pieces.Thank you, Syr, for enjoying this rather sad Free Verse piece! ⁓ Rascal🖌
PS: On your recommendation, I had to check the site out … do you know how one edits their poetry?
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Thanks, Buddy👌
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Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂
Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌
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I need a prayer by this point. And thank you.