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Hello Crimsin. Thank you for the feedback.
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I liked this.
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Thank you a lot. 🙂
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You’re very good a setting up intrigue and suspense
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Thank you a lot dear.
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My pleasure – dear 💖
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I love reading your unique and fearless poems Ms A
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You spoil me with your words and I like it a lot. 🙂
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Good. You deserve this spoilage. It’s sweet though. 😉
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Yes it is sweet.
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Read MoreOn my last drunken escapade,I was sitting in my girlfriend'sliving room.It was 3:28 am, I was suckingon a cheap bottle of vodka, andIt was sucking the soul rightout of me.I knew things needed to change.She had just sucked me...
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hello dearest Thomas I wonder what has you sad your girlfriend or the drink and I’m curious what the bird symbolized…nice metaphoric write…💕
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Thank you Crimson. Both had me sad. Bird represents freedom and serenity.
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You know, when I drink Vodka, we’ve got dragons catching ravens. I just leave those motherfuckers alone.
Every poem tells a story, Thomas. I love it. But it does look like your girlfriend would have driven you.
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lol. Thank you. You are fantastic.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. I can definitely relate my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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Vodka is my demon drink but I just read yesterday that it’s good for your heart in moderation…
Translation: it’s always good to clean up from time to time. The drink will be there, you just have not be too.
Powerful confessional
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Thomas W. Case posted in the group Published Authors
My Book, Sleep Always Calls is available on Amazon. I also have a you tube channel where I read my poetry.
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Read MoreInspired by: Blink-182 – Gohttps://youtu.be/YS1FvpS8tL8?si=ffTn33M7DeFRxbgQyou say you won't leave because it's love but that ain't love I think it's fucked he treats you like a piece of crap gave him all your cash for he could go out drinking with friends when you speak up he...
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Powerful
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Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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Holy Damn, Nick. That’s good.
(Take the ‘e’ off your ‘grab’)
I love the refrain. It emphasizes urgency. I like the conversational tone, the second person narrative… the pleading.
This is a gut-wrenching piece, and I can feel it to the core.
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Thanks for the read. Abuse is something that doesn’t get enough notice. I know I grew up around it as well as many friends and family. I think it’s always good to put a light on that issue.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Can feel the emotion in your words, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, friend. The read is very much appreciated.
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hello lovely poetess this is very interesting great write 💕