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Benjamin Scraps replied to the topic DUP farewell playlist in the forum Underground Caverns
Really miss that old music thread at DUP but feel like we can make this our own Stars Rite music thread. Sometimes I have music playing when I write, and my algorithm is a complete mess
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Read MoreAn electric voice tickled my groove,abstract shapes on the titan blur.... it bit with a bolt through trembling rustfrom a coat of flesh to bare the wireswaking an age for minding the stagewith invisible eyes on unseen highs winging a glance...
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This is a very interesting piece. “where feisty pink ribbons howl at the moon” really good line
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you are very gifted I feel you on the highs of writing 💕
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Read MoreDays of daze, dancing din,worn-out welcomes track in fleshhunting-horrors on dog-eared wingsto (nightly) tingle my dribbling brain… I am buried ‘neath the skinon the outside-inas I cover the site with alien light a xenolithic burstfrom my heart opaque… glaze of gin, gushing...
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Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Clever title, and a really incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest poet greetings…this is very masterfully written I can sense its heartbeat 💕
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Okay, this took me a minute to break down. In the beginning, you give me an archaeologist digging up an Egyptian site, but then you put the chimera in, and that’s Greek. So that put me on pause.
So I came to settle on this poem is about the Gods. (I could be absolutely bonkers with this one) Good piece.-
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Supernatural entities think they can create situations where they can feed on our thoughts & emotions through mindless entertainment and misleading media, not to mention religious and political corruptions that create a culture of authoritarianism through false scarcity and fearmongering….and they are right!
I got my crime shows and horror flicks at the push of a button for approximately an hour every night…voila, dopamine city! It really is sorcery, which I try to seek in the mundane everyday shit we take for granted. Our minds don’t register certain things as magic because they are commonplace to us. This technology we use….it is true wizardry thru n thru!
Thank you for that observation! Very helpful.
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Read MoreWith each shallowing pulse,my heart bleeds on.With each beat,my heart hollows. With each weakening push of blood through my veins,my heart bleeds on,and my limbs turn cold and deathlike. With each beating of my drum silencing,you can no longer press your...
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Death and passion rolled up in one. The repetition of the heart beating makes it more powerful.
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Sounds like something Type O Negative could put music too. If Peter Steele was still with us. Nicely done, Daniel. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe first time we metYou were dyingI was going to help youI can’t helpbecause you did not want to be savedwe shared a joint on your back porchash droppin between my chuckswatchin the way you sank into silencelike it...
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A well written piece!
Did you use stream of consciouness, Fia-in-collab-mood? HeheheGood job both of you! “)
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Thank you so much, M.E. Actually, no, the idea came to me, and Ambjr was kind enough to see what he could do with it.;))
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Great job…..
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Thank you, Peter;)) I may be heading your way. Hmmm
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I always wonder who’s face that is when I look in the mirror… nice collaboration
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Hmm a mysterious twin lol…..Thank you, Sam;))
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Brilliantly penned, Fia & Ambjr. Into the book it belongs! It’s not easy for a collaboration to make my book. But this was seamless, incredible collab you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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We made it into the book? Yes, yes, yes. Thank you, Damian<3
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This is such a well blended collaboration. And just real and raw. As good as it gets.
Great job you two.
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Thank you, Nick;)) Appreciate that
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Phenomenally penned, Benjamin. Fucking fantastic wordplay, great imagery as well my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian