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a very dark offering with a perfect flow ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wicked piece Benjamin. I love halloween as well. Great delivery!
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
The mind is the net that captures many moments. This is good.
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![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Thank you Fia.
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Love this – as usual
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![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Thank you.
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Thank you dear.
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Memorable, succint and deep. It warns me to not get tangled in my own memories. Hehehe
Well done, Amethyste! “)-
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Thank you dear.
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Read MoreShe lies therenaked, still,silentlegs parted like memory.Breasts fall sideways,eyes sealed,skin pale,blotched,creped,the blush long gone.We played this game often when skins were warmNowher skin is cold,I touch the silence.my Siren sleepsour long desirebreathes its last.ThenA thought enters my mindtravels down...
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Maybe she is tempting you one last time. good write.
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A dark and beautiful piece, dear Peter! Leave her body alone, your siren is calling for you from another dimension!
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Elke…. lovely comment.💋
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI haven't been home in a while. It still looks the same. The fake facade that everything is bright and beautiful when the beauty is an illusion, hiding all the decay. Anyone who has a heightened sense of smell...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling as always my friend. The final battle was intense. Seems like a bittersweet ending to me. Even in death the mother left a mark. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I thought about that even the evilest of parents may have one streak of kindness left.
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Ouch’ that’s taking mother love a tad too far methinks .. Just who’s side are you on he asked? Matricide, she replied .. Just ripe for Halloween my queen🩸🖤🐦⬛🐦⬛🦇🦇😎👍
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
You are correct, my friend. I was trying my hand at writing darkness. lol I am not good at it, but it wrapped it up neatly. Thank you, <3
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A very engaging story.
Troubling and sinister.
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Thank you, Knight;))
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Submittted by: Twofiftythree
SENT 23 HOURS, 20 MINUTES AGO
think I got it with this one…the world goes quiet when I think of you
as if the noise remembers to be kind
the pulse slows down the edges soften too
and somethin steadier begins to bindI’ve spent my life in motion hard and fast
chasin the fire never once the pea…Read More - Load More Posts
Nicely done. Love Halloween as well, and it seems the others are having fun with it.