I hope you didn’t drink the entire bottle.
🙏

Beautifully penned, P.G. Love the flow and wordplay my friend. Used to like Tequila, even better was Mezcal. Of course those days are long gone, I wasn’t able to do moderation very well. Anyways a great write. Appreciate you.

Damian

There is so much to unpack here: the not-quite-healthy relationship that just feels so good, too good. The conflicting knowledge that you seem all too aware of: /My head is telling me to drink more, my liver screams “GET IT TOGETHER!”/ Been there, done that too many times. Vodka was my liquor of choice, and Stoli was my dear friend (along with Camels) for a good while many years ago. The fact that the knowledge is there speaks volumes to you as a person. Excellent write! <3 Echo

This provoked a giggle or two!

Cleverly penned, DK. Can’t go wrong sex and automotive speak. You’ll definitely attract the gear heads with this one. All you need is loud guitars screaming out the speakers. lol. Liked this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Yeah, great flow! It feels like summer, wind playing with your hair and lots of weird thoughts on your mind! Great piece!

Haha I loved this Meg! Flow especially. “Ball bearings deep” love it!

Lemme at your Heme ….
Code for ass deep

BIG STICK SHIFT …..LIKE

You don’t need a ticket, baby. Just get in your jeep and drive down here. I’ll put on my shortest denims for you…

xoxo

Tongue in your tailpipe…

xoxo

I’ll wash you down after I take them off.

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Love the wordplay and phrasing my friend. Nice flow as well. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Visions 🙏

Thank you Mary!
And you inspire me to keep writing with compliments like that!