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Read MoreKafka: I exist in a corridor without doors,where names crumble before they are read.Each face I create dissolves into the mist,like a crime without a defendant, like love without a letter. Marilyn: I exist in the light that never rests,trapped...
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Thanks for being there my friend. ❤
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The back-and-forth banter is done well. The use of questioning each other I enjoyed.
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Thank you, appreciate you!
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The dialogue was great. Your a talent. Well done my friend.
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Viva Keith… I keep waiting for your comments.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Your writing shines. Excellent as always!
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Read MoreOnly In My Dreams✨In sleepy dreams of kindred spirits wed …it’s these I run to, chasing through the night.Before my eyes are closed, such dreams are spreadtogether, heart and soul ~ in fevered flight.Live thee, but naught lost...
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The longing in this is palpable. Very beautiful writing.
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Thank you, Alexandria 🙏🏼
Most gratefully for selecting this rather wishfully gentle poem in homage to unrequited desire.
How wonderfully encouraging it is to know you were able to actually feel the emotion of this piece.Your gracious praise gratifies a bard’s humble efforts! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Thank you, Alexandria 🙏🏼
Most gratefully for selecting this rather wishfully gentle poem in homage to unrequited desire.
How wonderfully encouraging it is to know you were able to actually feel the emotion of this piece.Your gracious praise gratifies a bard’s humble efforts! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Maybe so, Adira,
But, not quite as beautiful as You for sharing this rather lovely homage to romantic fate, with your ohhh-so warmly kindred spirit.
What would you want that you cannot have, right now?
One can only wonder and ponder ‘n wish! ⁓ Rascal🖌️
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Read MorePreamble: Love … a true lover's existence is created by blending two humans' universes into one.⁓ All Of Me ⁓O’ that my manly, sensual hands could divideeach erotic thought inside of you,knowing each and every one as my own.My legs to...
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How did I miss this? First, I love the layout of it. Second, my favorite thing that you started out with is the mind. I was all on board. Third, you went and laid down brick after brick of gems. I enjoyed this piece. Bravo ;))
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Ahhh, Adira🍷
Your gracious words speak in a most lovely, smile-invoking voice.
Thank you, Sweet Poetess! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Awww, Fia 🤗
That you love anything about my humble poetic efforts is blissfully unexpected, but I’m keeping every fragrant word. ; )
There’s nothing more preciously-inspiring than a lady-poet’s gracious praise to caress a hopeful bard’s grateful heart.Thank you, Fia, ever-so warmly! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Wow! Wow! Wow!
This is stunning! So fresh, unique, and enchanting. The imagery is so vivid and palpable. I’m captivated from start to finish… a magnificent ending. Powerful and seductive. An all-inclusive masterpiece.xoxoxo
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This may be your masterpiece my friend, or perhaps one of many masterpieces in your case. It’s incredible dialogue but their tongues speak poetry, not just casual conversation words. Damn, this was Chef’s Kiss. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian