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Read MorePain in the rain.That's what I callcrying beneaththunder clouds.So no onewill see my tears.So no onewill judge me.Concealing sorrowwithin the rain has been my game.No one sees me!Tears camouflagedby the teary clouds.No one will ever knowmy true pain.Well I'm tired...
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Read MoreSuch a strange thing,to normalize steamrollingthose you say you love.To blindside, catch off guard,not in moments of crisis,but in pursuit of your own comfort. You move with calculation,disguising strategy as sincerity,timing your truthsso they land like traps. Love, for you, is...
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I get annoyance and anger in this piece. With underlying hurt. Nice
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Thank you Fia, this is something I’ve had penned for a while. It came from observation of a friend, some of this is her words at different times, I just put it on paper and this is the end result..
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Brilliantly penned, Fred. This write has teeth and goes for the jugular my friend. I also agree with, Fia. There are tones of hurt simmering underneath though. Great write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, greatly appreciated my friend…
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Sorry to hear, glad all is good. Thank you for the read my friend……
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Read MoreUnder the winter day’swhispery glow,all is quiet here.This is my shattering.No more hymns of breath.Just waiting beside my tombstone.Dressed wildly in vines of time.Had you been a ghost too,would you have noticed me?Must death be the only way?Bound now...
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Great write my friend…
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Really, amazing on this piece. See me, see me now.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI know why you love bubble baths….It’s for the sheer joy they bring,the sly smile they leavecurling at the corners of your mouth –playful, inviting, seductive,as you slip slowwwly down …water displacing just enoughso liquid lips can lick you,as...
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This is sweet, Richard;))
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Thank you warmly, Fia,
I’m so pleased you think so, because you are, too. ; )Happy hugs! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Well, Dear Adira,
This, of course, is fiction, but in my imagination she did swoon, and then we made hot frothy love over and over amongst the caressing bubbles.
Ahhh-YES! That stanza is one of my faves, too … birds-of-a-feather! ; )I’m so grateful for your deeelightful reviews, Adira, and for my new title, too.
Hugs ‘n other lovely stuff! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Sounds like progress to me.
Good capture of how we guard ourselves.