Even though this is not finished, it packs a punch. Very good you two

Thanks!

Short and tender

Thank you Fia.

Aww, to have that smell linger in your mind. Good write

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Being an alcoholic has levels and rabbit holes, only problem is trying to navigate through the quicksand that one is slowly sinking in. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I never had a desire to drink but my mother did. I guess some people are prone to addictions then others. This is a gritty down and out poem, but always interesting when coming from your pen, Thomas.

Real, raw, treacherous, daring. Awesome!! Love this piece!

Thank you, Tim.

Thank heaven for that marriage between the sun and that trash .. Write on brother .. Neville 😎👍

Thanks, my friend.

Hoi hoi
Reading time 12 minutes?
It took me 24 minutes. I’ve read it with one hand!
Lovely piece of work!
Love that you wrote it. Love that you posted it.
Kind regards, Gus

Thank you, Adria! Glad you stopped by.

Oh,,,damn. This is intense and I can feel the rage. Love it. Thank you, Paula

Far far from a regular write. It got some anger out writing it down and I laughed a bit. Thanks for the inspiration.

Amazing write…..amazing woman.

🙏

Thanks.