Beautifully penned, Detritus. Dig the imagery my friend, amazing write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, my friend. It was one of those rare moments. I likewise appreciate you.

Those summer nights go by fast. Great ink.

The fireflies did it for me, a permanent night vision of childhood when poetry was found in every step, with every breath. 🙏🕊️

Oh nice! That’s an awesome backstory there🙏🏻🕊️

Enjoyed this pen work Detritus

Bat

A firestorm of beauty and passion as I read and this unfolded. Tenderly written with exquisite attention to the encounter told both emotionally and physically in a dance. Loved reading this.

John

Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.

I’ve always thanked the forces, liberating us from the
Love
Love me do
You
Know
I love you
Tyranny.

Looking back his Bobness only went half way…
Beautiful writes like this one do the rest.
Thank you for writing and posting.
Kind regards, Gus

A tendering, trembling new love indeed. Everyone can relate to this piece. Wonderfully done, RPM! Into the list it goes!

You can beat a drum and an egg of course but you just can’t beat a nice bit of gentle well stated erotica .. Neville

Ooh, love that comment. Thanks a bunch!