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Read MoreI was carved from the oldest tree by strange things in the beginning ancient things that dance and spill blood The music was sharp and cut deep into my creation of stings...
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In the fourth season there is a character that plays the song from Metallica. So epic!!!! I put the link below in case you’re curious. I haven’t been writing the past year. I’ve been busy trying new things so your comment means the world.
Thanks for stopping by:)
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Wow this is dark. I remember the show. Nicely written.
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Hey Fia. Thank you!
I wrote this yesterday trying to find my mojo. lol
It’s been a while since I’ve sat down and written anything.
I’m going to post more often but it might be some older stuff from DUP.
Im still simmering on my other write about wildflowers.
Fingers crossed I will write something this weekend.Thanks for the support:)
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What! Of course you should’ve been made! All of my bad luck, you are my salvation!
You don’t write “dark” much. But obviously you can when it hits ya. The plethora of details within the write make it full, like a bag of candy when trick or treating. (That black cat I saw a few weeks ago was right outside my front door this evening!).
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Hahahaha. There’s your word plethora!! You crack me up up.
Me a good luck charm? I feel a pandora charm coming on hehehehe
And you can’t take it back. I’m still your salvation but you have to take me shopping for girl stuff!
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I was telling Glen, at work, about my boots you got me! He was asking about when is the hat happening. LOL. I told him I’m more a ball cap guy.
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Well Christmas is around the corner.
I might surprise you!
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Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write my friend, this one has darker tones. I dig it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey there amigo. It’s the month of Halloween!
Now is the time for darker writes:)
I’m going to indulge in my dark side for a minute. lolThanks for the snaps on this write!
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Read MoreWith too much painful eye strain and too much social mediaI'm taking a break from both to touch grass, as they say.I apologize for any reviews I'm missing. See you when I return. 🙂
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Enjoy the grass;))
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Thanks Fia.
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Don’t forget to smell the flowers!!
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I’ll try not to. 😉
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Ground yourself, let nature speak to you and come back with a free mind and lots of inspirations!
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Thank you, Elke. 🙂
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Have a good break Tim. Come back refreshed.
Chris
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Thanks Chris.
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Take care, Tim. Recharge the batteries my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate the comment, Damian.
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Read MoreA Book Report using Cliff's Notes ( a non-scholarly review) The Whale filled several hundred pages the one-legged captain harpooned his dream and in the end went overboard with his quest and then in jest Ishmael told the others to call him finding later on that to be the first...
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lol, My nightmare book report was Silas Marner. I remember those days of summer that were stolen from us.
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Oh brother…they gave us such boring books to read.
Fia, thank you for replying to this piece.
j.
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Oh, thank God! For a moment I thought this would be some dry learned lecture, then the first verse got me chuckling. When Ishmael asked the others to call him, I just howled and my wife came back here and asked me what was wrong. I told her, “I’ll just have to read this to you.” So I did, and we both roared with laughter all the way through. Thank you so much for this one, Jake. We really needed that. You have any more like this? I can go put on the popcorn!
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ha ha….I don’t even lecture to my classes. All satirical and glad that it could give you a few chuckles. Thanks for letting me know this.
There is truth in this in the fact of me hating Moby Dick with a passion.
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Just please give us more of these. You now have a niche market your fans are literally howling for. Doing anything else could be dangerous.
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Cleverly penned, Jacob. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
j.
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Read Moreinside I crash into your energysmashing, cunted brillianceshining danger I can't resistinfidelity of the soulmy honesty is invaded by your darknessit seeps into my sorrowyour marred imageit makes me flinch what you call goodmiserable truth I hate the feelingof...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Love the depth and layers in this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian forgive my late response I find myself slipping of as of late ❤️
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Read MoreShe left without a goodbye.As though our nest was no longercomfortable enough for her. As though from a high perchshe saw something, or someone,better than meand flew off. But life is funnyand often horrific. They found her among the reeds.Some human animal...
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you. 🙂
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hello dearest Tim this is very dark great write ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin.
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Wow! The whole write is moving but the line about having her wings plucked and her breath made off with, great metaphors for death. You have a great talent mister!
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Thank you, my beautiful friend. 🙂
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I’ve honestly have only watched the first episode of Stranger Things. but your poem stands powerfully on its own. The imagery is so vivid and eerie, it feels like a story in itself.