The want and the holding back are tormenting. Nicely done

Thank you SeaCat!

Wonderfully written. I could feel the warmth of the fire!

Fantastic!

You always put the perfect image with your poems. Love this.

Powerful work. Superb.

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The layout is perfect for the rhythm to shine here.
Sometimes the thoughts we have turn into fiery poems, and often those thoughts burn up before they get to the page.
WE hope to be able to scrape up some of the embers and still put a piece on the page.
“here, here and especially here.”
j.

This was a fun read. I was told you get more philosophical when smoking. Instead, you get the brain burn. Nice

Powerfully penned. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

Damian

“I already forgotten your name. my heart has not forgotten you.” That is an Aww line. Nice

I don’t know but I do know how you’ve always managed to make me want to eat your words so I could digest a few and muchly increase my own writing!! I know: tis an impossibility. Unless a small bribe would help!

Laughing because I’ve oft wondered about that word or – is it a perversion!

By the way, we’re not going to argue about who’s the best, sir.. I, a mere woman, wouldn’t dare! More than probably.. .. .. ..

Fantastic work. Great to see you here, my friend.