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Read MoreWe created an imaginary town so we could drape our bodies over sky furniture Wed into badly drawn chapel we spoke in ghost as ectoplasm spears, stitched haunted mist to cold lips of yesterday River libraries flowed requiescat verse into the shopping centre hospital; intensive care was just...
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Ha. Watch out for those tables and chairs falling from the sky! Many thanks A
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The last two lines are epic. It’s a creative write throughout, yes, and the ending sends it higher. What a strong wording, thick with the weight of thought. It’s what makes us better readers, when taking on such things as this. No fluffy bunnies. Bears and wolves with a pen.
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Think this needs some re-working to be candid Mark, but such compliments from writers (and people) like your good selves, somehow make it worthwhile.
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Read MoreHome is where you are chipping the stoneto grave applause a look in the eyeswhen the lights go down awake to crouching (sure) ~the stars are not right for a place in.betweendilated paranoia, a mawkish glassfor snorting pastwith a...
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This gives me the scene of a poet upon a stage, reciting their words to an eager crowd. I have a feeling that reciting it makes it stronger. A voice that knows where the bullets go.
Strong write. Awesomely done.
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Read MoreBreakfast in Krakow For a moment or two,I watched herfrom across the table opposite me and there leaning over her shoulder,I saw a vision of someyoung woman whom I used to know so very well .. Indeed on that...
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This reminds me of when I get a weird dream that I actually remembered! lol
I always wonder where did that come from. No vodka, no nothing.
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Bless you my friend .. Next time, try a double .. Neville
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Cleverly penned, Neville. Was you possibly seeing double? lol. I don’t drink anymore, but I know the vicinity all too well. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cheers, what more can I say other than a big THANK YOU .. Neville 😎👍
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Superb work.
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Many thanks T .. N 😎👍
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Read MoreBlood in: so daft in my grave, a fresh-cut flesh-nutslips & falls into proverbial groove through an open vein- this sleepaway cavecraved awakeon chords of lightthrough ancient rowswhere I soak my cellsin the green sereneslurping gasoline a break from thoseunblinking high beam ~eyes at nonsense rituals cleaving clean: this all-seeing dreamwinked at...
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Once I read sky furniture I knew this was going to be a unique read with
lots of imagination.
Then river libraries flowed.
Just wow. I loved where this took me.