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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Give me one more chance
My Father
I only had to love you
But I was a fool
Because I never once
Prayed to you
And I know that is wrong
Yes I should had prayed to you
Every night
But stad I decided not too
Now I am feeling guilty about that
Also I don’t have any respect for you
Please give me another chance Father
I must change
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Read MoreThere is a war no one else can hear. It does not sound like bombs or sirens— it sounds like overthinking at 2 a.m., like a heartbeat that won’t slow down, like silence stretching too tight across my ribs. My mind is a general— cold, strategic, disciplined. It...
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I try too, thank you 😊
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Thank you 😊
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it’s still going today.
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With poetic flair, you write words I can relate to. I’m reminded of a dark period I went through long ago. (Divorce and subsequent quest to find love again) I believe storms can’t linger forever, and are eventually pushed aside by the sun and blue skies.
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Read MoreYour mouth is a promise half-kept, half-aching. Red like truth spoken too late, soft like a confession I’m afraid to finish. I don’t touch you yet. That’s where the power lives— in the pause, in the heat gathering behind restraint. Your breath leans toward mine like it already knows how this ends. There...
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Wow.. what a brilliant, romantic and sensual poem! Love it!!😊
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Thank you 😊
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That’s good, I’m glad you like it. I’m happy if I can make someone’s day inspire them and help them that tells me I’m doing something good. 😘
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POWERFUL, powerful writing.. and yes, you should ALWAYS believe in yourself!!