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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
So sad he had to go
Yes he was suffering a lot
He was an alcoholic also
He used to drink like fish
Yes he was destroying his liver
Also he had
AIways screamed when he was drunk
It was terrible
To see him like that
He spended a lot of money
On booze
Also he had ulcers from drinking
God had finally shut his body
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Don’t ask me why
I am a child of God
Don’t ask me why
I am a middle class person
Don’t ask me why
I made friends with poor people
I don’t like the rich people at
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Read MoreOnline warfare being waged everyday Some tech-pimp living in a wet dream Everything on the menu is pay to play Swinging pendulum picking up steam Broken hearts corrupted by confusion Unable to see through this cold illusion Artificial beast hides without disguise Cyborg sex doll disregards...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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thoroughly enjoyed Damian .. & then some .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hellish visions. Intense feeling.
Regards
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, James. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes intense feelings guide the poem along in my experience. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A bit towards the apocalypse in its foretelling, yeah? I also get a “War Pigs” vibe as well (Black Sabbath).
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see the “War Pigs” vibe too. Sabbath has always been an influence in my creative efforts. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow, one more of your excellent, intense and thought provoking right things, dear Damien! Especially the last verse speaks to me a lot. World most people consider God as all seeing eye that is watching and judging us, all sing that UI energy is just experiencing itself, manifested and the form of a human being. So it is entirely up to us what to do with our lives. Personally, I think it is best to listen to our heart and to our intuition. Why won’t lead us a stray.
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Sorry for the typing Arrows, Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No worries about the typing errors, it happens to all of us from time to time. It is best to search for the light in all things in my opinion. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The dawn of machine signals the end of man if caution isn’t employed. Got all these billionaires using computers to do the skills they lack so they don’t have to pay a human to do it. They’re willfully writing us out of the margins and people are just buying into it. Everything is subscription based now. Even things we bought and paid for. We’re paying to exist now. We need a revolution, bro
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
How will I spend my days
Every single days
I don’t want to spend my days alone
Do not forsake my father
He is the man
That create all of us
Children of my Father
In his image
Many years image
We all look different from each other
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Well this is musing. lol
liked the people like privacy they get intrusion part really good