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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe sun struggles to rise The water is flat The stillness of the air Casting blindly Instinctively know where it lands Let it sink into the depths Invade a secret Slow movement The soft under tow pulls A grip tightens Give and take increases Angle diverges One last powerful pull Culminating into...
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You sure you went to the right place? ☺️
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I never knew fishing could be so much fun…
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Yes it is😁
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. This was a clever and sexy write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Yes the fish called the big O. Lol
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Did you use bait? Hahaha
A beautifully written piece! “)-
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I did use bait (wink)
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Sounds very therapeutic 😌 hehe
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It is…I just need to hold that rod tight;))
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Damn! Fia, you caught me off guard with that hahahaha 😆 😂
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All I could do was smile at the cleverness of this allegorical vibe.
One of my favorite poetic alleys.
Sexy, sexyNaaj
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I made you smile? Great.
Thank you, Naaj
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Oh that smile says a lot at the end.
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Thank you,Wally;))
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You did say something eloquent 💋
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Read MoreI am alone with those awful voices. Nay, you reader have a real voice! Those hallucinations are evil static! But I find, that I may find a way out. And then away for home, to what home was meant to be! Away from these cursed voices! Away...
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I need a prayer by this point. And thank you.
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Oh my life has been one long, dark journey. Writing since age 10 has helped me cope with psychosis. Sometimes I write what I hallucinate. Sounds crazy but it’s true. Again, thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling my friend. It’s sometimes wild how much power the mind wields. Thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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