The ending ties it all together well. And I agree with the mic drop line.
Regards James

Not a bad way to be. There’s always a bit of magic feeling to what we do.

this is beautiful I am way too arrogant when I write❤

You are full on magic in every way

are you around for awhile? If so can we talk on gmail?

I feel this…I don’t think I really weave my words on my own. I am but a conduit to jot down what comes to me in either a daydream or nightmare.
I really appreciate the brevity in your poetry. You leave us dimensions to visit in a short space of words.
j.

I feel like a child in front of the universe. Thank you for the support. One question do you share on writerscafe.org?

hello dearest Ghost this is a feeling work of art❤

Thank you Crim. The words are over 2 decades old and they are as distant as my feelings for her. It’s important to not get shackled to the past, otherwise they define and cause misery. I moving to foreign lands, so my stay on this site will be brief.