It is nice to read that a man still appreciates a woman’s maturing body

One of my favorite places is beneath a pretty woman’s dress. 🙂

I am certain that every man is completely agreeing with You here, what a playful Neville!

A mature was to admire a woman!

I snickered and thought unclean thoughts like a school boy when first read, completely missing the lady’s age, sidelined, as I was, by the niceties behind that dress. Now aware that she might not be young and that I’m no longer 12, my motor is still revving. Summer dresses are just so fine!

Really beautiful piece, showing lovely appreciation for another. I enjoyed this.

Many thanks for stopping by and checking out my little scribble .. so very much appreciated .. Neville

The passion and play of this is an utter delight. I love wearing dresses. They’re a one and done, no fuss picking something to match. It’s the feel of them I think most women prefer. The feminine quality that stirs a man’s imagination…so well captured here.

I’ll take it, that’ll do nicely .. Very nicely indeed .. Cheers & Many thanks Kelly .. Neville 🍷

That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville

I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️

I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.

I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend

This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.

Powerful work.

I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.

Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.

What depravity does the rip tide take you to..

This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
😜

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡

Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.

John