-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreGood Morning, You did one thing wrong, you woke upIf I haven't told you beforeI'm tired of this rut As my stomach turnsAcid reflux burnsI know exactly what I must do Do you know how I feel? when you devour a mealGo look...
16 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Thanks dude.
-
-
![Profile picture of PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)]()
Great! Happy to see you here. Big hug.
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Hello PAR. Appreciate the comments.
-
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hi Keith this is very honest❤
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Nice to hear from you Brenda. Thank you..xo
-
-
![Profile picture of Jacob erin-cilberto]()
If they were Krispy Kreme, I might understand the urge. But wow, Vol, this is so upfront and in your face, I think it
simply broke the mirror.
j.-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
HA! Yeah Krispy Kreme’s are good. That mirror has been broken for a long time. No need to fix. Thanks Jacob. Appreciate it!!
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend, you still bring it. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Thanks Damian. Appreciate the comment.
-
-
![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
This is a hard hitting piece that tells more about the state of the relationship than about the outer appearance of this woman. If he looked at her with the eyes of love, everything about her from the messy hair to the stained dressing gown would appear beautiful to him. He would only see her inner beauty. But between the couple you describe there isn’t much love anymore.
Perfectly observed and put into words, dear Keith! Xoxo-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Hello Sappho. You’re right. There is no love left here in this relationship. Only criticism and mockery. A wonderful observation only you can deliver my awesome friend.
Peace..xoxoxxo
-
-
![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
Kinda felt that way about my first husband. I have referred to him as Fat Boy and tiny-dick. Worst was that despite being nearly 400 lbs (I always say 600) and having a “stub” – he cheated! Add in the violence and threats…I wished for him to die.
It took 20 years after I left but he’s gone! -
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
DAMN! I believe you mentioned “fat boy” & “tiny dick” in a few of your writes. Appreciate the feedback, always!
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Well, Damn, the reiteration of Go look in the mirror is a banger. People generally do not see what they become until they are forced to. Keith very, very open write
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
True. Appreciate the feedback.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreI offer myself to you twice a day,at morning’s opening, at night’s soft closure an endless vow that neither time nor agecan strip away.I know the reasons you reject my offer:weariness dragging, desire gone quiet,the body’s shifting tides,the cooling...
3 Comments-
![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Lucky you 💋
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
That’s a stimulating offer if your a woman. I hope you received many. Cool write.
-
![Profile picture of RPM]()
Loved this piece…the offer, the pain, the excitement, and the hope of it all!
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Tim wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreJust a note.As a long time member of Writers Cafe, for a few days now I haven't been able to log in. And if I'm able to it's the result of a long wait. Unfortunately this doesn't surprise me....
8 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Tim;))
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
My pleasure, Fia.
-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
It does seem like other sites are less commini& more population. It’s unfortunate that another site seems to be fading. But we have our little neighborhood here
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thanks for the comment, Willow.
-
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hi dearest Tim I;m happy to see you here I struggled when I switched over but I like it here❤
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
It’s a good site, crimson. Thanks for the comment. 🙂
-
-
![Profile picture of Jacob erin-cilberto]()
WC got so frustrating. I was on there since 2008.
I tried a few sites now and decided. But as Willow put it…”a little neighborhood here”—and
I hope to be allowed to move in permanently.
j.-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Yes, the streets here look pretty nice so far. It’s basically a new site so there may be a few glitches but otherwise, I hope more people from WC come over too.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Amethyste wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreYesterday I met youYou were wearing a maskAs embroideryNonetheles we kept talking.
6 Comments-
![Profile picture of Jacob erin-cilberto]()
Perhaps the speaker knew they also had on a mask. Perhaps on the inside.
Much to think about from these few words.
I always find that less is more.
j. -
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Yes sure I had a mask too, unfortunately. It is universal. Thank you.
-
![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Barefaced boy in the swamp here
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
I am glad. 🙂
-
-
![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
I am glad t know you dear.
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Hugs. 🙂
-
-
![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS and
Bobbington are now friends
![]()
![Profile Photo]()
- Load More Posts
Welcome back