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Read More5.33 amback deckcup of teabirds callingno windfruit bats returning home8 billion human beingsso very few experience these moments it really is just dumb luck no God involved.***************************Quote from Stan Gramt in this mornings paper:As a society, as a species, we are...
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Thanks for your thoughtful comment.
The only real problem with AI is, that it makes the truth almost impossible to discern.Seeing used to be believing but not anymore.No doubt, the powerful and the wicked will use AI for any other reason than to create poetry etc.💋💋💋💋
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Read MoreAh, the smell as I entered the house, I could smell everything neededThere was someone living here that thought Death could be cheatedAs I carefully closed the kitchen door behind meI grabbed a knife from the counter and then...
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Hahaha, kids right. We heard someone say once, you’re to young to know what love is, be careful of those words. Thanks Lady
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Love is a motherfucka that can twist the mind.
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Exactly dude
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Read MoreAs the guillotine's blade slid into the flesh of her neckShe recited a spell while giving birth for the executioner to inspectThe same blade was used also to cut the umbillical cordThe executioner saw the sixes on the baby's...
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This is playing out like something I can see on television. This is good ME
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That is quite the compliment, thank you Lady
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We asked you before do you enter of your on free will? It was in relation to a piece at the time, a little darkness never hurts. Thanks Lady
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You already know I fuck with shit like this. Keep it flowing.
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Thanks a ton dude, much appreciation
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Read MoreWe met at Club Transylvania, a spot that caters to our tasteIn this club it’s all about the darkness, instead of money or faceShe was just curious, I could taste the innocence all on herOver drinks of Bloodied Marys...
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It seemed that he found the one he was looking for. Very intense piece.
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Don’t we all like intense even in darkness? Thank you Lady
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It’s just tat time of year isn’t it. heck Casketsharpe is killing it. Thank you Lady
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Read MoreThe Shadow of You Sitting here thinking, drinking my Black and Tan contemplating the stormy motion I see in shadows ***** Yes, it’s dark in there but, occasionally you can see different shades of black mixing with greys and an undercurrent of blue. Sometimes, usually when you least expect it,...
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Powerful work. I felt this to the core of me.
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Thomas, thank you. Your presents is muchly appreciated
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This is a very beautiful work, my friend. I love your, “unruly midnight moon,” and there are so many other lines that touched me deeply; if I tried to mention them here I might as well write every line.
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Someone told me that to describe the feelings within shadow was a testament to writing good poetry. I don’t know about that, but I admit, I love this poem, the flow of it, and that you saw and felt it is warmly appreciated. I knew an artist friend who drew scenes in pencil. She had one piece, a landscape, done in black pencil that I swear when you looked at it deeply, you could see blue streaks flow in it. Some of that experience of seeing this piece of art is what I tried to capture in this poem and where that line: “…kaleidoscope of greys” came from.
Mary, thank you, your visits and comments mean a lot to me.
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FlatDaddy, it thrills me that you were touched by this poem. You might be surprised to know that unruly moon gets really rambunctious at midnight. Then again, we are the same age, so you probably know all about unruly moons. At any rate I truly welcome your visit and thanks for a great comment (and message).
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There is no future in the past. Only lessons. Nice one