This is a strong piece of work. To friend yourself…. You have to do what you you you want…. Not what he she they want … YOU

Twenty years is a feat of patience and forgiveness to carry on with it. Always chose you over anyone else.

Very very good write….⭐for you.

Thank you, Peter. Much appreciated.

hello beautiful Pink one this is self empowering good for you wish I was so strong 💕

Thanks, Adira. I really appreciate your comments.

A strong poem letting go and finding yourself in the act. A great thing you did.

John

I’m so proud of you Pink 👏❤️

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Great lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Whoa!!!
First off, splendid writing
Very unique and intriguing topic.
Powerful stuff

Naaj

Thank you Adira! 🙏🏻

Great lyrics, my friend! I like your play on words. Your song is an awesome listening pleasure!

I couldn’t help but giggle @ ‘living in they mommas basement’…

This is the definition of toxic.

You laid it all out there, vivid and raw.

Loved the Rod Serling tying that was very clever!

Great ink, Naj
Looking forward to more

Powerfully penned, Naaj. This was kick ass, a raw spill my friend. Loved the “Rod Sterling” element. Appreciate you.

Damian

Great piece. Loved the last stanza in particular.
Impeccable flow.

hello dearest Naajir this is some powerful writing…California rent is no better and sometimes we hate each other…💕great write…

Yikes…yeah, watch the spaghetti…

Oof.. it’s one thing to have swamp puss…but eating her spaghetti too? Some people have nothing to lose…lol, I enjoyed the humor in this spill..although it’s so real and so raw. Well done Naaj! xx
~P.G💋

Haha…Glad you enjoyed Dragon-Fire.
Thx for the support

Naaj