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    Bad Breakup

    I knew it was over… the day your hand lay lifeless in mine. That sudden goodbye and that iciness you shared. Glares… not beautiful gazes. Sharing hands with a corpse then made it a wintry day. It was a shimmering...

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    • Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the weight of this write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Your poem is so beautiful and sad, Daniel!
      ‘Sharing hands with a corpse’. This speaks volumes, and cuts like a knife. As always, your work is beautifully written with a masterful use of imagery, brilliant!

      • Ja, ich schreibe wunderschön mit einer meisterhaften Verwendung von Bildern, Elke. Ich denke gerne, dass meine Arbeit brillant ist, aber ich weiß noch nicht, ob ich ein Meisterautor bin. Nächstes Jahr werde ich einen fertigen Roman haben und ich bin nervös. Hahahaha!

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    My Gothic Candle Flame

    That teardrop shape of my light! A glow with many shadows cast. The vaulted heavens above catch the long thread of smoke rising when my candle flame’s pinched. My smoke pools and condenses as my blackened wick cools. The teary streams of wax dry and my tears...

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    Advice I would give to a friend

    You've been so bravefor so long;it's OK to let go now.You don't know which way to fall?It's safe over here;if and when you are ready.

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    • Oh! This is good.

    • Nice advise. Short but to the point and comforting.

    • On point….you’d make a very good friend.🙏

    • Powerfully penned, Ellie. Sometimes less is more, phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • “If you fall, I will catch you, I’ll be waiting
      Time after time.” — Cyndi Lauper.

      I listen to a lot of music and often find myself writing a response song or a continuation. I have posted a couple here.

      You just have to be there in the morning and be there in the night change whatever’s wrong and make it right. — Olivia Newton John (paraphrased).

    • Letting go can be the hardest part, and also the bravest.
      Wonderful piece of advice.

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    News and Updates

    Hello, Stars Rite members. This is another episode of the news.It has come to my attention that even though we want to promote inclusivity on this site, intolerance and inappropriate verbiage of a person’s work to cause unease intentionally...

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    Hello, Stars Rite members. This is another episode of the news.

    It has come to my attention that even though we want to promote inclusivity on this site, intolerance and inappropriate verbiage of a person’s work to cause unease intentionally will not be tolerated.

    We can make this site a little more comfortable for those individuals who…Read More

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