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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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Thank you,Peter;))
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Heartfelt in a new way
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Thank you, Jim;))
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
Regards James-
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreI Indiana Jones'd my depressionWith fake smiles and aggressionNo spores of joy in sight to teach me counter lessonsSporadic sessions of anxiety suppressionAnother forced excursion to divert the world from questioningIn actualityThis evil king is suppressing meBut in a...
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This had me moving. The riff is good, and the music went well with it.
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Always a pleasure to read your opinion Fia! Thank you so much!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Your arrangements always fit your words tightly. Excellent work.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the kind words Damian!
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Oh Lordy! You’ve done it again.
It’s like you know what melody/hook to use depending on the tone of the lyrics.
Where to emphasize your message. I listened to this when you posted but didn’t know how to reply.
I was at a loss of words! That is rare! Hahaha
Much respect chica!
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Thank you Adelphina! It’s a lot of trial and error but I warms my heart to hear people appreciate it. I’ll keep at it and hope to keep improving along the way. Have a wonderful day!
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Thank you! ❤️
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You’re a beast at this thing Lady, to freaking Tight
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Thank you! More coming in a few days (hopefully)
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This i awesome. I somehow talked Fia into getting a Spoken Word group going (actually, I kind of bamboozled her into it). HER wants to join and she suggested we get Willow and you as well. After listening to this, I feel really out of my league. I’m a lifelong entertainer, but mostly in theater. When I started writing for performance, I had no music, just me, so that’s what I’ve been doing. But you would bring some real class to the group, and if we do this right, we can build something outstanding for all of us. Interested?
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Hey, what happened to the audio? I sent a link to this page to a friend and he told me no song was here, so I came back — and it’s gone! Please put it back.
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Apparently because of an update on the site, all audio on all posts got removed sadly. I hope I have time tomorrow to upload the audio again on all my songs.
In the meantime you can listen to the songs on my YouTube channel if you’d like: youtube.com/@Drieks
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That I would like. So tell me, would you like to join the Spoken Word Group? You would be a very welcome member, and I think we can all benefit from each other.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreSpeak to meWords insight and exciteSpeak to meCradle me in actionSpeak to meTell me the nuance of your touchSpeak to meI overflow in anticipationSpeak to meLet it be rough and rawSpeak to metake me in the dark so I...
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Ooohhh. This is good!
Loved take me in the dark so I can see the light
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Thank you so much, Adel. It was fun.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Fia. This write was fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian,))
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I feel that this is a calling out that we al can relate to, and be enthralled by. it’s an all consuming request that is determined and also inviting too. Like “give me that and I’ll give you this” type of trade. We write with emotions, so perhaps we look for emotions in return. Yeah?
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Thank you Styxian;))
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![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Fia, I could feel the entreaty of the woman as she beseeched her lover to give her words. I do agree the right words can make for a magical night in our out of bed. This poem speaks to me in a way that I could feel. Very well done.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
Oh yes! Tell me more…more…more!
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Ooo, RPM. (Smiling)
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S. Libellule wrote a new post
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Read MoreUpon an endless paper plain,the sword leans—half blade, half quill.Black ink falls like dark tears,gravity grieves in its remembrance. Each drop forms a kanji—unwritten yet complete;the keen edge hums calligraphic,penned silence within this violence. Strike and poem share one stroke—both wound...
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Fantastic. Oh! I love the blade.
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Powerfully penned, S. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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孤独なトンボ Kodokuna tonbo ≽༏≼
(Lonely Dragonfly)The mind is touched, sad emotions softly whispered unto, your diction, Dear Poetess, lends a tale of long ago … yet, ever-present in the Samurai heart’s core ‘n eternal soul ~ his katana.
And, ohhh, you’ve sang it’s poignant timbre as a true Onna-Bugeisha, who always spoke her power equally by virtue of ebony kanji or blooded tanto.The rhythm ‘n flow of your Free Verse Quatrains dance above the page, as though transporting us into those feudal moments of yore … the magick hallmark of a master poetess’ pen.
I strived to highlight a word, a line, a verse for you … alas, all conspired to create the whole of exact poetical symmetry – your artwork choice in sheer perfection.
I gratefully bow 🥋 … thank you, Dear S. Libellule ⁓ Richard ⛩️
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The soul of a samurai rendered into a pome of compelling wonder. You have the spirit of Japan written with the Zen of a poet who can translate a culture and a place and its people into poetry that resounds like koto music in the night.
John
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Nicely done… smooth… soothing… great flow…
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Powerful stuff Fia