Sweet descriptive piece with hints of longing

Hello John,

Your description here captures the atmosphere so perfectly. Your detail is always so razor sharp. Nice work.

Beautifully penned, John. Phenomenal imagery my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your poem puts me in the mood of sailing and travel, the image of a sailor who is watching and expressing the scenes, keeping it in his head because soon it will only be a memory. There is sadness going along all the lines. Emotionally written.

Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

Inspiration can come from many places, but to be able to create something like this is exceptional, John. Great poem with creative images. 🙂

hello dearest Me this is beautifully dark and sad ❤️

I don’t know why this one makes me think of giving all for love. It’s beautiful in its darkness. But then again, too many don’t see the beauty of the dark

We really appreciate your support Lady, you’re to tight

To take on the pain to protect what you hold precious. Beautiful write

This is the best thing of yours that I ever read.
You should be congratulated.
Congratulations dear.

You are welcomed at least that much. 🙏🏼

“Jim is correct” I like the sound of that. But really, I appreciate that and the fact that you see the wonder of this poem tells me a lot about you too. 🙂 💚

😊 Thank you dear.

TY – too kind would imply harm of some kind, like killing you with it. I think you don’t mean that tho. I think you mean you like me. I like you as far as I can tell from here 😉

You mean out of my freakin’ mind hysterical or funny?

🙂
be well

The bees chasing the flowers over and over again. We are chasing something, but what is it?

You forgot a birthday. Well, it looks like you made up for it. lol

Sam, I hope you’ve learned your lesson! Maybe invest in a calendar? Lol, God forbid you forget an anniversary. 😉 Great read, just enough to get the blood pumping.

xx ~P.G💋

Hoi hoi
Love this one a lot. Really good write.
The corners of my mouth have a will of their own and keep on turning up.

Did you ever considerate writing a song to the accompaniment of slamming doors?
If you are not going to do it, I will.
Well, honestly someone’s got to do it huh?

I’ll be on the look out for your next.
Kind regards, Gus

That story sure illustrates a great way to show forgiveness.

im sorry… I hope that heightened sense of arousal didn’t get you in trouble. ill go hide somewhere so you dont find me