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Wally wrote a new post
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Well now, this is quite loaded with some serious wording! Not easy I am sure, to carry the rhymes along as you did.
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Professionally done, Wally. Each followed the same syllable count and I like the alternating rhyme scheme. And for the meaning, I think the chosen words are just right to convey the yearnings of the heart. 🙂
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As always we read the piece first, then wondered what it would sound like. You never disappoint Lady, this is tight, that first stanza screams
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Epically penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics with a powerful message and being a rock/metal guy I love the arrangement. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m truly blown away by this.
I’m reading it as I’m listening to the audio clip.
This is a talented piece of art.
So articulate in its own way. I love it! x
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