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Read MoreAn unripe tomato sits on my window sill a green globe, tight as a fist clenched around nothing but the warmth of the sun. It craves to be split open, to feel the knife's sharp touch, wants juice to run like a secret down the wrist...
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Painfully sweet and the hopeful part had me smiling. Excellant
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Thanks Damien and Fia for reading and commenting……I do love tomatoes and I’m sure you do also.🍎
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There’s a damn clean erotic metaphor here, with the unripe tomato carrying desire in its tension—green, clenched, sun-warmed, and waiting for the moment when restraint finally gives way. The ending lands hard because “hard and hopeful” collapses the whole image back into the speaker, turning ripeness into both longing and surrender.
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Read MoreHello everyone and it's been a while since I had to give everyone an update. We are still working on why some of your posts are being tripped and put into drafts. (A matter of fact this was supposed...
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Well said, and thank YOU, Fia and Sam for all that you do for us. HJx
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Thjank you, my friend. Good info.
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Hi Fia, eroterite isn’t accessible: the site is showing as not working. Has it been permanently shutdown? If so can my stories be removed, please and could you close down my eroterite profile.
Many Thanks.
HJ
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Bat Powers and
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Read MoreI would love nothing more than to burn the manuscript! It has always been an honor and a joy for me to be Dante's muse. But ever since he began working on his new piece, which he has titled "The...
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Hi,
Nice to see your prose versionJessy Jacob
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Thank you very much for commenting, Jessy!
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Wow sappho the description you use instead of the normal everyday wording is exceptional. Sorry it took me so long to read this amazing work.
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Massive thank for your support and appreciation, dear Fia! Your kind comment means a word to me!
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Chère S/Chère E.,
Ahhhh…, another one of your gems!
Hope this finds you well. And I specially hope that you do well under the circumstances!In a Zelt, I don’t get to check on all the goings on, and now I regret I’m a
‘Little’ late.You write the most intriguing stuff!
Petje af/Hut ab!
Keep them coming please.
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Thank you so much for your kind and valuating comments, dear Gus! I am so glad that you like my writing! Thanks I am well, and I will message you soon, my friend!
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Thousand times thank you for your support and your appreciative common Harriet!
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Another excellent write with delicate layers my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian