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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
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Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
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hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
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Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
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hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
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Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜
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hello dearest Benny blushes well yes…thank you graciously you made me smile 💕
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Oh! This is very good, Brenda.
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good morning dearest Adagio thank you graciously 💕
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I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞-
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what a beautifully sexy comment thank you graciously Jim 💕
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I love that you think so – “..beautifully sexy…” mmm
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hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕
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Powerful. You paint this scene well.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.
John
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Read Morecontemptious need flooding over my sorrownever on the morrow to be let freeit's just another day of sadnesswith knowledge, heavy privy to his holiest's feelingsbedlam vain, I am not enough, I'm afraidlike Cain before me my gratitude is given...
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Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
You are loved.-
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hello lovely Alexandria good evening thank you most graciously for such a beautiful comment and thought 💕 I guess this was a conversation I was having with God today sometimes I feel like when he asks something of me I am ungrateful…my heart hurts over this that my first insinct is to be selfish…I truly appreciate you tonight 💕
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I don’t think you’re selfish at all. I think you’re hurting. 🕊️🌾
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously forgive my late response I thought I got back to you on this one ❤️
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Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.
John
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hello dearest John that is such a beautiful comment and thought just lovely thank you ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Outstanding my friend. You take passion and love for this one person and enshrine it into a poem as divine as it is beautiful.
John
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Very much enjoyed write from the off to the opposite end of the page .. I hope to check in more often as I learn how to navigate these stars .. Warmly, Neville 😎👍
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hello dearest Neville good morning and welcome thank you graciousy for the love on this and look forward to get to know you through your poetry 💕
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Likewise & thank you 💛👍
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Dark and Misty emotions.
A journey through sorrow.
Regards
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hello dearest James thank you graciously for the love on this sorrow keeps me honest 💕
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What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
😜