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Vivid and sharp. Fantastic work.
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good morning dearest Thomas thank you graciously for the understanding and lovely comment ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreMelancholy sits quietly and I with herwith a gentle remider to breathewe watch the cotton candy clouds flow byas we lie watching blue skiesa stark contast to our moodhurt on a colorful dayit seems wrong and out of placethe...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, really dig this one a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously I’m happy you liked it ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Such a fine verse. I really needed that. TY & hugs+++
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hello dearest Jim thank you graciously I know my metaphors are funny I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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hi dearest Keith good evening thank you my friend I can be gentle when I want to ❤️
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I don’t know dearest Tim I believe if we listen we can hear nature and the earth talk…it is at all possible…everything has a frequency thank you for your thoughts ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
really!
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Am I weird if I got aroused by this? ‘Hope so…
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hi Jim good evening not at all I’m happy to have that affect thank you ❤️
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hello beautiful good evening thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Seductively dark, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian please forgive my tardiness ❤️
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Read Moregentle understanding, in your depths I searchto find a way to reconcilethe wild ways of the world and your nature Fatherinside me is conflicting feelingscreative need, you admonish me you prefer my softer sidecruel desire is the way of...
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It is very bewitching. When he tells you to stay calm so his monster does not come out. nice
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hello lovely Fia he told me last night after I posted my poem he said he knows I am capable of this mischief but he prefers my softer side…I asked him further about his varied sides and he says it’s all in what side I provoke will I get from him thank you for reading and commenting ❤️
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Crimsin, both tender and fiery this poem is. He tries to elicit your soft side but his true nature brings out the lioness. Great poem as I have come to expect from you.
John
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Brilliant work. Powerful.
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Brenda, you amaze me with, “of others playing on different courts.” Love that line.
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Read Morecoveted need leads me onward into the darkwith a witches eye I see what is going on in the doldrumall to spark an affliction, desperation a mode of opperationseeking culted desirefire speaks and ignites passionin dreaded dominion find yourself...
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give me a sip?
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
smiles at you thank you Jim ❤️
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
I like that a little witches brew should do. Made me smile.
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thank you graciously lovely Fia was my pleasure I’m to give you a smile ❤️
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![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
What a fantastic Halloween temptress poem that gripped me as I read. Playful and seductive and so wickedly dark.
John
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thank you graciously dearest John I’m happy you enjoyed ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Brenda. Amazing Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously you made me smile with your comment ❤️
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If you could syphon off the witches brew and sell it you’d be a millionaire. It’s a good job, only witches know how to make it.
Great read.
regards
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hello dearest James the powers that be tell me I won’t profit off my talents…then again it’s not what I seek… thank you for reading my spell ❤️
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happy Halloween dearest Keith thank you graciously ❤️
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hello dearest Tim I am fortunate actually it took many miracles to get me to this age so many brushes with death…nature is beautiful to look at I guess I just have to remember my time will come no matter where I am and all I can do is do my best until then I am just feeling my mortality thank you my friend ❤️