Ok you had to do seven not just one. lol These are really good.

Okay, I’ve never written a Senryu in my life, I’m too lazy to do that. I don’t know much about them: when I saw they were difficult to do correctly, I moved on to my own difficult mise-en-scène: blowing up words and phrases until they made people laugh, regardless of spelling, context or what others thought. But I do know good, smart writing when I see, read, or hear it (my favorite), and you’ve certainly shown us you have that in spades. Or in Senryus at least. Nice work.

“shadows bark my name
I toss one a broken thought
it brings back a grin”

“clarity short out
thoughts glitch like gods on crack
I praise the misfire”

Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent writing my friend. Dig these lines above. I couldn’t pick one over the other, killer fucking lines brother. Appreciate you.

Damian

much appreciated Rich. I enjoyed learnin it from ya.

I love mathematics at least up to algebra. Lol. This brings a layer of heat that’s calculated and sensual. Very nice

Passionately penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. The last stanza drove the point home. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautifully penned, Fia. I remember last Thanksgiving on DU as well. I agree that our new home is special, and I appreciate all the work you put in to keep the site running, cuz. Along with Sam and Bobbington and all that contribute to keeping the lights on in our creative sanctuary. I’m thankful for this community of gifted writers and amazing people who share their stories and invite us to experience their journey with them. Happy Thanksgiving to all of the Stars Rite family! Appreciate you all.

Damian

Chère F.,
What a lovely idea to organise a Thnksgiving dinner.
I am still grateful for a number of very successful coops with DUP people. Very rewarding in terms of the gentle fun of putting energy into the work and make it work.

From some 4.500 listens, to an estimated 12.500 (Loving you – with Faith Maree), it resonated immensely in Europe. I am trying in a very small way, to make that happen again.

I can perfectly understand that the burden on the DUP mistress became too heavy. Therefore, I am most grateful/thankful that you have taken the initiative to give us a safe harbour here.
And I will try to extend my being thankful to the rest of the days, and not only on the 27th of November.

Warm regards, Gus

Outstanding piece of writing Fia. Your message and passion here on starsrite is unlike no other. Applause to you for keeping this site active and fresh all the time. Happy Thanksgiving to you & your family.

hello beautiful Fia Happy thanksgiving thank you for bringing us together and for dedicating yourself to us and this site ❤️

I’m afraid it’s too late for my plead to keep the poor turkey alive… But it’s never too late to express my deepest gratitude to you, dear Fia for dedicating your heart and soul to Starsrite🙏
You served a delicious meal with your writing😘

I’m so sorry I missed this “Friends-Giving”! It is a pleasure to be here among all of you, and I wish you a very Merry Christmas and Happy Hanukkah! Now, would someone please pass me some pumpkin pie, and that tub of Cool Whip!

I’ll keep my eyes open, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

what is the URL beautiful Fia?

Chère F.,
I feel in safe hands with you.
And I am grateful for that.
Warm regards, Gus

Thanks for your attentiveness.

Okay, Fia, I’ll look out for that, but I’m curious as hell! So what’s it all about? I’ve never heard of this before.