I liked this, Damian.

Oh, so totally resonates. I don’t know where I would be without my proverbial pen. And I spent far too many years perched in neutral…only to discover there is no such thing. Either your ass is leaning in one direction or your nose is. I prefer staying informed & walking the path that suits me. Shadows & all. And i find like souls along the way when living authentic. Consider this one on my reading list with emphasis, my friend

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Agreed, there is always more to the story. Appreciate you.

Damian

That’s beautifully reflective—wisdom framed not as some lofty concept, but as lived experience layered over time. The imagery of seasons and fences evokes quiet contemplation, hesitation, even resilience. That last line? A soft unraveling of illusion. It reads like a quiet reckoning.

Superb work. Powerful.

Mic Drop!

Ouch…… someone done you wrong.
Good write and after summer comes autumn,winter and spring….don’t be duped when a new summer arrives.
🌞😘

I like to think so too ☺️ as always Adira, I appreciate your kind words.
xx

Yes, this summer is new you and your strength cannot be denied. Love this piece you put out.

Next time around it’s your turn to retaliate. Take names and kick ass! Amazing poetry PG.

Intriguing…

I like the contrast you used in some verses. Dark thoughts indeed. Well done, Fia!

Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend, with dark vibes very present. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Adira;))

Fantatic!

G’Mornin’, Fia 🌤️

Good title, and what a great lead-in with V1’s frustrating contradictions setting the mood for what’s to come (L2, make it “you’re” sad).
Boy howdy! You sure know how to express the angst so many of us have had to endure and overcome; yet, it seems some never do … sadly so.

You’re such a creative writer, Ria: I admire your keen ability to weave vivid imagery and emotion throughout every verse and in the use of spot-on rhymes, timely line-breaks, and smooth flow.
Excellent wrap-up verse, too. For rhyme’s sake with “despair,” consider using “there” rather than “here” (just a thought).

“Wake, wake from this despair! (great poe-esque touch)
It is me you’re talking to …
no one else is there.”

Fia, you’re such a joy to read and share with. 🌈
Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard🖌

Very captivating.

Thank you, Steven;))

I wish this didn’t resonate so deeply with me. Sigh…

An eye-opening write! Unfortunately true and real.

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Nice arrangement, and you’re just a phenomenal lyricist my friend. So relevant in present times, and so unfortunately true. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Outstanding!

Thank you so much Mary 🙏🏻

Adira, thank you!! It’s been a while… lol
xoxo
~P.G💋

Wicked trilogy. Yes;)) this is hot

These lines sparked flames in here. Take it easy. You are going to burn the whole site down.

M.E, how else shall I leave my mark? 😈
xx
~P.G💋

Passionately penned, P.G. You’re still bringing the heat my friend, always dig the layers in your writes. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Foreplay can never be over-rated. It’s the starting of a fire between two lovers as they swim through time enjoying each other to the fullest. As the song goes – Nice and easy does it every time…that is…until it gets hot and heavy. 🙂

Good writing…hot and seductive.