Beautifully penned, Brenda. Just the right amount of dark undertones my friend. Great spill. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautiful….absolutely!!

Naaj

Fantastic piece of writing Brenda. Well written and marvelously executed.

I’m never away. You can find me underneath your bed. Waiting patiently. Sweet poem Meg.

This is beautiful and I can see why you could want endless sleep.

All of a sudden I can’t open my eyes anymore… yup definitely a witch 🧙

Excellent write..thank you for sharing

I’m going to go have a little nap now….not post coital but a nap nonetheless.💋

I couldn’t leave you out… succubus.

Gee, Lady-Poet 🥀🐝

With such eloquent skill you’re blessed; and, this gorgeous Kyrielle Sonnet, laid in perfect iambic tetrameter and revealing refrains, proves it ~ ohhh-so brilliantly!

What else to say when you’re away,
but that my dreams are all of You.
When every motion’s set a-sway …
warmth undulates me all night through.

“Last night, you came inside my dream.
Though, desert heat would have us keep
our love apart, you poured a stream
and left me wanting endless sleep.” (MM-mmm!)

Herein, Dear Poetess, fraught with vivid imagery, emotive lure, smooth as silk diction, and metaphor to turn the most masterful bard green with envy, you’ve word-painted us a dream to build ‘n hold onto.

Excuse me, please, I feel the fantasy pillow softly calling my name! ⁓ Rascal✨

Longing ‘twined with love and lust was palpable. Plus I totally loved the refrain at the end which tied it together perfectly. Well felt writing, Mistress Kitten!

Beautiful. Dreamy and relatable.

Your sweetness melts me.
Thanks for stroking me girl…
Can you hear me purr?

It comes with a lot of dirty laundry. LOL
But yeah, you know… I invited you over. A pajama party without the pajamas.

xoxo

Outstanding! WOW! A bookmark for sure on this one!

Dang girl, can i make an appointment at your clinic?! As always, you conjur some hot stories.
“Aroma of my dripping infidelity” was a sexy turn of phrase.
What a work day must be like for you as you think of these stories as you go about your business!

I feel like I have seen this plot in a movie somewhere. Hahaha
An erotic exciting write!

Loved this! What wild abandon here. You made the scene so sensually alive and vibrant. You build the sexual tension into a supernova of explosive pleasure. Each interaction so laden with erotica galore. You sure know how to get a guy’s attention. I was fixated throughout.

John