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Read Moreinside I crash into your energysmashing, cunted brillianceshining danger I can't resistinfidelity of the soulmy honesty is invaded by your darknessit seeps into my sorrowyour marred imageit makes me flinch what you call goodmiserable truth I hate the feelingof...
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thank you graciously dearest Damian forgive my late response I find myself slipping of as of late ❤️
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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Hello Crims!
I like the old-timey vibe of this. I wish there was more along this type actually. It just seems to set a nice tone when reading. Like those before us perhaps. At any rate, this is a wonderful poem that you’ve presented for us.-
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hello dearest Styxian good evening I’m happy the language of this write spoke to you it was how it presented itself the poem I mean thank you so much for letting me know ❤️
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Hey crimson!
The last line is a dark but beautiful visual. It gives me a Celtic vibe.
It starts off with wonderful bits of love then changes tone.
I love the word pairing of sweeping crimson. It’s like a red wave of devotion.Love your stuff chica:)
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hello beautiful Adelphina good morning thank you graciously for such a lovely comment❤️
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hello lovely poetess thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously my friend ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian good morning ❤️
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This poem is a vivid, honest look at desire – full of passion but also quiet vulnerability. The contrast between the “neon God” and “bluebirds” is striking and memorable.
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thank you graciously lovely poetess ❤️
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I feel these words. They are otherworldly, uttered from another world beyond the one we inhabit.
Kind regards
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thank you graciously dearest James what a beautiful thought ❤️
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Spooky and spellbinding, crimsin. I like it. You capture the magic within the spell. 🙂
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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously I’m happy you felt the magic❤
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![Profile picture of Jacob erin-cilberto]()
First line fifth stanza, did you mean “summon”?
This was fascinating…and as Tim said…very spooky.
I love the idea of “stalking my vision”!
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hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously yeah I meant summon…lol ❤️
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Powerful work. You nailed it.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Love the depth and layers in this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian