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Read MoreMidnight Blues in TremeDegas in his studioPaints the NOLA cotton exchangeWhile sad clouds driftLike floating islands of Bible belt dreamsHigh on the calluses of blues guitaristsWailing like the ghosts of HadesThat haunt Claiborne AvenueLike a hobo with his stove...
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Beautifully penned, John. The blues, the imagery, you painted the scene my friend. Fantastic read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m glad I befriended you….nice observational piece….oh to be a cashmere sweater now that spring is here.
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I’m glad you befriended me too! It’s good weather to take off your sweater!
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A little bit of rhyme is kind and sublime and stirs the mind….
You always deliver dk …BIG LIKE
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I’m so glad you like this! Thanks for your poetic reply. I still think about your toys…
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I’ll be your humper…
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And I know you’re not an idiot…
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I bet I fit you nicely
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Such a vision
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Beautifully penned, Jade. Some dark undertones on this one, a fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, You are right. This was inspired by darker moments in my life.
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hello beautiful Jade this is some fine poetry allowing me to feel your depths 💕
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Thank you kindly Brenda. Sometimes I really get into deep emotions…and I pen it out.
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I assure you we are not the only ones. I have not healed completely but this heart of mine is pretty resilient. Thank you for reading.
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Thank you Visions, your comments are much appreciated.
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Read MoreWine-Scented Dreams:Ballad of a Creole Moon Louisiana had been returned to France from Spain and my gait had a new liveliness which could only be that of a lover. My fifty-year-old legs carried me down the colonial avenues of...
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Fantastic storytelling, John. With a lot of history and incredible imagery. Another great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Deeply grateful to you Damian for reading my story. Love how you picked up on the history and storytelling here. Very much appreciated. Appreciate you very much.
John
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Visions I am thrilled that my poem left that impression! Indeed that is exactly the setting for this poem. Love that it felt authentic for you.
John